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Rite Of Passage

Rite Of Passage _______________ I haste not I fear not in harmonious cries, I plead where flight has called this mighty warrior red paint upon my cheek O' cleansing smoke of wild grass high of resin and sacred bead a vision has taken this warrior's cry anon, to capture a dream I crawl through gates to reach the ledge where spirit and smoke arise and pluck the painted Northern Flora and gaze through Savanna's eyes

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Date: 4/3/2025 11:42:00 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/3/2025 6:27:00 AM
Wow. Your rite of passage invokes a clear vision. Different cultures promote this rite. Native Americans' are most intriguing. Very nicely done Rick. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/2/2025 7:43:00 PM
Interesting. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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