Rite Of Passage

Rite Of Passage 
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I haste not
I fear not
in harmonious cries, I plead
where flight has called this mighty warrior
red paint upon my cheek

O' cleansing smoke of wild grass high
of resin and sacred bead
a vision has taken this warrior's cry
anon, to capture a dream

I crawl through gates to reach the ledge
where spirit and smoke arise
and pluck the painted Northern Flora 
and gaze through Savanna's eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 9/6/2025 10:59:00 AM
Dear Rick, congratulations for your success in Mark's contest with your exceptional poem. I adore the soulful, beautiful, sacred spirit of this intriguing piece. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/29/2025 7:38:00 PM
Rick, I’m impressed with the way you have us feel and experience the “right of passage” instead of trying to explain it to us. Very effective. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 11 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 12 has already started.
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Date: 4/3/2025 11:42:00 AM
Awesome work on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara K
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Date: 4/3/2025 6:27:00 AM
Wow. Your rite of passage invokes a clear vision. Different cultures promote this rite. Native Americans' are most intriguing. Very nicely done Rick. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/2/2025 7:43:00 PM
Interesting. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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