Urning the Rite To Make Sense of It All

Urnestly, I search for words
buried beneath the veneer.
The rite way to ashes and grief.
Contained in a purple jar,
her only tear— a hoarder's memory.

Death makes no sense, the
bed relied upon— a cramped space
in the dark, not at all
what I was expecting.

No marker with flowers.
Her jar’s become a place of “cheers.”
Dad’s tears plink into his afterglow martini.

10/15/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 10:59 AM
So sad; death is such a loss. We have never invented the right words, and yet you have somehow found them all for this one Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 18, 2021 at 1:03 PM
Thank you, dear one…
DiMino Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 2:18 AM
Wow! I feel the sorry and loss. Have felt, still do, such sorry and love. I agree, I think death, if making sense at all, it is only to the departed.... Grief...sorrow...has no sense outside the living moment, for us, who are left alone, compelled to feel and wounder in earnest outside our faith. Great write!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 16, 2021 at 5:32 AM
Thank you, Joe :)
Sands Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 3:35 PM
I can feel this. Well written Kim :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Heidi. xx
Mcintosh Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Sad but so emotive it flows beautifully. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 7:39 PM
Thank you, Gina <3
Calasibetta Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:49 AM
It is in grief the story emerges and one swims in the perennial memories ….. A beautiful write! Blessings, Paulette
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Thank you, Paulette!
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Of course death makes sense! How could we enjoy butterflies without the passing of a caterpillar? Aren't you dying to get angel wings?
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:53 AM
Missing my mom and feeling for my dad.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:49 AM
Everyone expresses his grief differently. hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:52 AM
Yes, they do…gulp
Lamoureux Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 8:02 AM
This is quite an interesting way to deal with a difficult topic. So well done. Hugs Rick.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:51 AM
Thanks, Richard :)
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