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in graceful flight they glide with ease across a skyline that’s doused with fire a sacred rite upon a breeze sun sets divine and wings soar higher A-B-C-D E-F-C-D AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2023 Submitted on March 17, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1091 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on March 16, 2022

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Date: 3/31/2022 9:56:00 AM
I like this one's rhythm, rhyme, and flow. Way to go with this place of honor on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/31/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated
Date: 3/19/2022 12:04:00 AM
Congrats Line, have been seeing arrows of Geese returning daily here in Minnesota, beautiful rhyme...jim
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Date: 3/19/2022 6:55:00 PM
Thank you very much, James ~
Date: 3/18/2022 10:08:00 PM
Great scene. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/19/2022 6:55:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj ~
Date: 3/17/2022 5:21:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL Line, I'm going to uncover the kayak and head off soon....
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:35:00 AM
Lucky you !! Thanks for the visit, John ~
Date: 3/16/2022 11:46:00 PM
Simple and elegant, Line:)
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Date: 3/17/2022 8:35:00 AM
Thank you very much, Jo ~

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