Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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Sunset Ritual

in graceful flight
they glide with ease
across a skyline
that’s doused with fire

a sacred rite
upon a breeze
sun sets divine
and wings soar higher



AP: 3rd place 2022, Honorable Mention 2023

Submitted on March 17, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND 1091 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

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Sara Kendrick March 31, 2022 at 9:56 AM I like this one's rhythm, rhyme, and flow. Way to go with this place of honor on the winners' list. Congrats. Sara Line Gauthier March 31, 2022 at 11:38 AM Thank you very much, Sara ~ most appreciated

James Marshall Goff March 19, 2022 at 12:04 AM Congrats Line, have been seeing arrows of Geese returning daily here in Minnesota, beautiful rhyme...jim Line Gauthier March 19, 2022 at 6:55 PM Thank you very much, James ~

Christuraj Alex March 18, 2022 at 10:08 PM Great scene. Congratulations! Line Gauthier March 19, 2022 at 6:55 PM Thank you, Christuraj ~

John Lawless March 17, 2022 at 5:21 AM BEAUTIFUL Line, I'm going to uncover the kayak and head off soon.... Line Gauthier March 17, 2022 at 8:35 AM Lucky you !! Thanks for the visit, John ~

Joanna Daniel March 16, 2022 at 11:46 PM Simple and elegant, Line:) Line Gauthier March 17, 2022 at 8:35 AM Thank you very much, Jo ~