Concretely Poems | Examples


Concrete Flower

A flower sprouts in the middle
               on hard concrete...
         Concretely, it's a miracle !
Categories: concretely, allegory, allusion, appreciation, extended
Form: Light Verse

Confession

heeding the worst; lips 
he would rehearse; kiss 
purpose would hurt his-
heart it immersed; drips-
sweat and a forced breath
the words that his mouth bled- 
loud and dispersed; head; 
nose; can’t be reversed; dread; 
rose; slurred and dispersed; face- 
burns slow and they turn; red; prose; 

skin; skirt; eyebrows;
nails; bangs; tied blouse; 
face; flushed; dry mouths-
gasp at the air with a slight growl 
sun’s hold eased by the low ground 
still on the roof but the air drowns 
neither can breathe but they hear sounds;
seeking concretely to cry bounds 
leaking not speaking; their hearts pound;  

peak in, the bleak slims are feet from the brink- 
hymns now pink from the lean in, their ink-
now strings linked- end to end, so in synch-
resonant resin-drink leaking pen-head, a sea-
of red flesh entity, now they rest as they heave-
moving chest, shaking teeth, throats compress, then release; 

rosy mesh;
feign retreat;
sewn in flesh;
aching bleat;
Categories: concretely, anxiety, beauty, courage, crush,
Form: Rhyme


How Stoic Are We

What happens to
                       the state of fear
                       that we just realized...
                       but concretely
                       we only sense,
                        we truly endure... !
Categories: concretely, adventure, allegory, allusion, fear,
Form: Light Verse

Existence of Silence In the Worlds

Silence is dressed in emptiness,
walk the opened paths
of further silences and absences...
Does not produce smells, and neither
spreads visions...
But it felt concretely
by the most thinking minds
and suffering creatures...
Noble but strange circumstance
this is the existence of silence
in all worlds... !
Categories: concretely, allusion, appreciation, metaphor, silence,
Form: Free verse

What Is Love Concretely

What is love ?
Concretely,
it's a wave that
wet the body
completely
without using
a drop of water...
is a fire of
a million of
degrees, that
warm up
an ocean
of sensations,
and does not burn
a single thread of
hair...!
Biochemically
equivalent in flavor,
 one ton
of chocolate,
but causes
no harm
if consumed...
just spasm
of gluttony,
and the feeling
be satiated...!
Categories: concretely, allegory, allusion, chocolate, imagery,
Form: Free verse


Scenes of Life

A sneaky girl in the
 tiptoe, look over
 the window ... a disheveled doll
 almost loses everything in a wash ...

 Phenomenal music goes through
 my spine and my vibrations
 silent strings ...

 An astonishing scream from a
  powerful throat announces:
  the fruit seller ...

  A pet kitten protests
   in painful meow by heat
   and shelter ... evil men
   they do the ball ...

   A light cut makes the street hell ...
   Everyone seeks sailing, light ...
    but not the clarity ....

    Scandalous and sassy garbage
    crosses the sidewalk causing
    my anger and overshadowing my
    joy ... Things that touch
   any sensitivity ...

     The sun is sort of cold,
     after the stupendous gale ...
     I manage to arrange blankets
     of clouds for him ...!
  
      A plant sprouts in the middle
       to solid concrete ...
       concretely, it is a miracle!
    
      I look at the sky and I feel dizzy
       with such greatness ...
       it's God's wonder ...
Categories: concretely, allegory, allusion, celebration, creation,
Form: Free verse

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Categories: concretely, art, poetry, word play,
Form: Imagism

Formula

To have the formula
   from the sweet word , I have honey
   of poetry, every day ...
    I lay in my  crystal bed
   and I fall asleep
   in the purest alchemy ...
   My poetic dreams
   they are concretely
   ethereal ... are colorful thoughts,
   live particles
   from Heaven ...
   I notice people as
   worked jewelry,
   sculpted works,
   recent flowers,
   lights sent ...!
Categories: concretely, allusion, bereavement, creation, emotions,
Form: Free verse

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Concretely Amazing

"everything I do, I do it for you"


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Notes: To laugh is not to cry, to make someone else smile, heals old wounds, to feed someone, fills you, to remember the suffering of others makes your own much less, and if you cry, that's ok too, just remember the many who cry with you. After the dark, there is the light...
Categories: concretely, angel, appreciation, dedication, education,
Form: ABC

Struggling With My Imagination's Running Shoes

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me on this four lane highway 
my mind is blank and immune, at the moment, to all sounds period

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me at this unfamiliar exit
my mind is concretely focused, at the moment, on all thoughts of her

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me every degree from all emotional sides of my car
my mind is spinning dizzily, at the moment, when i brake slowly at the sight of her house

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me circling around her neighborhood like a reluctant husband after work
my mind is on cruise control overdrive, at the moment, with selfish visions of 'what could have been'

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me returning home to my Unexpected Dream Come True
my mind is on nothing as i rejoice while thinking about the rigid circle of circumstances that lead me to You....via the Lord....AMEN....
Categories: concretely, conflict, growth, how i
Form: Free verse

Mark My Words

Free from me, this gnawing Aggression;
To soften my Heart, concretely hard
Trampled under the Wheels of Progression-
Which have left me disfigured- scarred!

Via vox, I vow a pox,
Pour my hatred in unwav'ring Will
Mark my words, I shan't be stopped!
(But oft' my Hopes fall unfulfilled...)
Categories: concretely, hate, heart, hope,
Form: Rhyme

Looking At My Fingers

In my room
I saw my fingers
That I have never thought of

It were all together
But it were different to each others 
I looked at and 
My other hand burnished each one

I checked one by one
I wanted to know
The best one and 
The hate one

Abstractly and concretely
I compared with 
hopefully and hopelessly
It was difficult to find 
An answer for both
Best and hate

I need all and love for all
Without anyone
It is a vacant to be called 
Hand of right or left

The use and the  beauty 
The movement and feeling
My heart and mind will reject
If one deviate from the other

I looked back the past
That already passed
I could not 
What I today attained

I wanted to write and to call
To my friends who are in silence
To my enemies to whom I closed
It was too late for past
But tomorrow is for all

Udaya R. Tennakoon
Categories: concretely, absence, feelings, friend, happiness,
Form: Classicism

Visitors

How can a house be cold in summer's love
Yet gardens grow and puddles disappear
Inside the walls of frost which I speak of
I live unconscious of the month and year

As nature speaks in tongues unclear to hear
Infected with no memory of time
My memory the victim or the crime

Moreso, methinks my real estate is haunted
Seemingly not a rodent coy and stranded
Can raise a dish and break it when confronted
Oh Lord, I cry to thee as if abandoned

Weak of fatigue, or fear and heavy handed
Be it wizardry woeful through conception
Or be thine eyes figments of false perception

Cabinets close and open quite sporadic
And tablecloths remove themselves completely
Unwearied are the footsteps in the attic
If thou art dither, dost dither discreetly

Thine wish would be for thou to dry concretely
If death adores the soul to be at peace
Why hast thou abandoned thy coffin's lease?

Whispers attract my force untoward a prism
And memories forgotten fast awaken
Now voices blare a tune of exorcism
Myself the ghost, causing thy to be shaken

Oh Lord, I cry to thee a soul forsaken
Forgive me for my soul, non-fiction juror
As I'm the ghastly figure in the mirror
Categories: concretely, confusion, death, mystery, memory,
Form: Rhyme Royal
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