Mark My Words

Free from me, this gnawing Aggression; To soften my Heart, concretely hard Trampled under the Wheels of Progression- Which have left me disfigured- scarred! Via vox, I vow a pox, Pour my hatred in unwav'ring Will Mark my words, I shan't be stopped! (But oft' my Hopes fall unfulfilled...)

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Robin Davis

Date: 11/26/2013 8:21:00 AM

Chan my friend These words are intense, sad, powerful, and interesting. You know how to use writing to captivate the reader and keep them intrigued. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Smack Down poem. Love and hugs Sweet Pea

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/27/2013 6:20:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea <3

Jay Loveless

Date: 10/8/2013 4:08:00 PM

I really like this! I love how your style seems to hold often angry or sad possessions and yet are done in a, (i want to say uplifting way. Its not quite how I mean but. . .) Their sassy almost :)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/27/2013 6:20:00 AM

Thanks, Jay; I appreciate your thoughtful review :)