Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Mark My Words

Free from me, this gnawing Aggression;
To soften my Heart, concretely hard
Trampled under the Wheels of Progression-
Which have left me disfigured- scarred!

Via vox, I vow a pox,
Pour my hatred in unwav'ring Will
Mark my words, I shan't be stopped!
(But oft' my Hopes fall unfulfilled...)

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Robin Davis November 26, 2013 at 8:21 AM Chan my friend These words are intense, sad, powerful, and interesting. You know how to use writing to captivate the reader and keep them intrigued. Thanks for the awesome comment on my Smack Down poem. Love and hugs Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet November 27, 2013 at 6:20 AM Thanks for dropping by, Sweet Pea <3

Jay Loveless October 8, 2013 at 4:08 PM I really like this! I love how your style seems to hold often angry or sad possessions and yet are done in a, (i want to say uplifting way. Its not quite how I mean but. . .) Their sassy almost :) Just That Archaic Poet November 27, 2013 at 6:20 AM Thanks, Jay; I appreciate your thoughtful review :)