Best Concretely Poems


Premium Member My First Abc Poem

Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
bcdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
cdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
defghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
efghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
fghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
ghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
hijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
ijklmnopqrstuvwxyz
jklmnopqrstuvwxyz
klmnopqrstuvwxyz
lmnopqrstuvwxyz
mnopqrstuvwxyz
nopqrstuvwxyz
opqrstuvwxyz
pqrstuvwxyz
qrstuvwxyz
rstuvwxyz
 
stuvwxyz
 
tuvwxyz
uvwxyz
vwxyz
wxyz
xyz
yz
z

Concretely Amazing

"everything I do, I do it for you"


New form "ABC-Concrete-LyricQuote" form


Notes: To laugh is not to cry, to make someone else smile, heals old wounds, to feed someone, fills you, to remember the suffering of others makes your own much less, and if you cry, that's ok too, just remember the many who cry with you. After the dark, there is the light...

The Enjoyment

on his deathbed
he stares up at the ceiling---
a stale, supposedly calming
light blue, basks down upon
his now disease ridden body &
with all the tubes pumping
painkillers & poisons into him,
he’s finally fallen into submission,
giving up the last remnants of
resistance to the belief that the
doctor’s have been right all along &
that this thing is a final determinant---
this thing is going to be what 
does him in,
probably much sooner than he had
anticipated.

for him, there will be no more trips 
home, for him, no faces of family or
friends will be seen---unless they come
to visit of their own accord,
rather, these are the pondering hours,
possibly days,
in which even the gentle clicks & beeps
of the machines beside him
send his fuzzy mind into a series of
stream of consciousness memory waves
which connect pieces of his life
that he could have swore he had forgotten
up until now.

each one is burnt on the wall inside his
skull, each one comes up like brail neath’
the fingers---translating the minute details
of the rising glaring images appearing in 
his barely awake state, the whole while 
reminding him of the eons which seemed
to stretch themselves out into the years
that now have been rolled up into a bundle
of fleeting, flashing, seconds.

while not all the memories are positive,
as the darkness still creeps in, the fact
remains that an overall peace takes hold
convincing him concretely that there is
no more reason at all whatsoever to 
dwell on those places in his head, those
nether regions which brought anguish in
the past & dragged on throughout his 
life, bringing up new pain like the enduring
side-effects of a drug---instead, now, the
calming blue above begins to morph into
a gorgeous lake, one which he went fishing 
with his father up in the Adirondacks, 
when the green canoe was filled with 
the essentials of the day (the bait, cokes,
sandwiches & of course, Lay’s sour cream &
onion potato chips) & time seemed to stop
completely, whilst the two of them shared
an afternoon coasting along the quiet waters
of a lake which they solely occupied, taking
turns rowing & casting out in hopes of a
big return.

What Is Love Concretely

What is love ?
Concretely,
it's a wave that
wet the body
completely
without using
a drop of water...
is a fire of
a million of
degrees, that
warm up
an ocean
of sensations,
and does not burn
a single thread of
hair...!
Biochemically
equivalent in flavor,
 one ton
of chocolate,
but causes
no harm
if consumed...
just spasm
of gluttony,
and the feeling
be satiated...!


Looking At My Fingers

In my room
I saw my fingers
That I have never thought of

It were all together
But it were different to each others 
I looked at and 
My other hand burnished each one

I checked one by one
I wanted to know
The best one and 
The hate one

Abstractly and concretely
I compared with 
hopefully and hopelessly
It was difficult to find 
An answer for both
Best and hate

I need all and love for all
Without anyone
It is a vacant to be called 
Hand of right or left

The use and the  beauty 
The movement and feeling
My heart and mind will reject
If one deviate from the other

I looked back the past
That already passed
I could not 
What I today attained

I wanted to write and to call
To my friends who are in silence
To my enemies to whom I closed
It was too late for past
But tomorrow is for all

Udaya R. Tennakoon

The Chapped Skin of Localized Truth

bewildered, i try to find a chapter in which a comforting compromise is inevitable
awestruck, i seek the majestic bookmark that restores that definitvive warmth to my hypothermiated soul
i need your warm hand on my heart until forever becomes a limited mute
i need the central base of your reassuring vibrations until endlessness develops bruises due to multiple bumps, slams, and crashes
a virgin in the dark sitting under the medicinal consumption of a streetlight, i revisit the merciless deluge of parking lot depression
i recall your absence leading to a dizzying constipation and a nauseating compression
the stubborn tears unfallen still produces a pain obstructing my 20/20 view of the actual reality
i once thought that this was how it USED TO BE
i used to think that letting you go would prevent you from becoming reduced to me
then....all....of....a....sud....den....i....re....be....gin....to....m....m....m....miss....you.......
i cannot believe that i see reflections of the tantalizing technicolor i feel when i would kiss you
now all i have is my invisible itch request....and....all....i....can....do....is....sadly....and sim...ply....list....you.....
in vain and shame for my personal survival to concretely remain my must MYSELF take a frigid dip in Truth and properly....place....the....blame.....
© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.

Mark My Words

Free from me, this gnawing Aggression;
To soften my Heart, concretely hard
Trampled under the Wheels of Progression-
Which have left me disfigured- scarred!

Via vox, I vow a pox,
Pour my hatred in unwav'ring Will
Mark my words, I shan't be stopped!
(But oft' my Hopes fall unfulfilled...)


Concrete Flower

A flower sprouts in the middle
               on hard concrete...
         Concretely, it's a miracle !

Visitors

How can a house be cold in summer's love
Yet gardens grow and puddles disappear
Inside the walls of frost which I speak of
I live unconscious of the month and year

As nature speaks in tongues unclear to hear
Infected with no memory of time
My memory the victim or the crime

Moreso, methinks my real estate is haunted
Seemingly not a rodent coy and stranded
Can raise a dish and break it when confronted
Oh Lord, I cry to thee as if abandoned

Weak of fatigue, or fear and heavy handed
Be it wizardry woeful through conception
Or be thine eyes figments of false perception

Cabinets close and open quite sporadic
And tablecloths remove themselves completely
Unwearied are the footsteps in the attic
If thou art dither, dost dither discreetly

Thine wish would be for thou to dry concretely
If death adores the soul to be at peace
Why hast thou abandoned thy coffin's lease?

Whispers attract my force untoward a prism
And memories forgotten fast awaken
Now voices blare a tune of exorcism
Myself the ghost, causing thy to be shaken

Oh Lord, I cry to thee a soul forsaken
Forgive me for my soul, non-fiction juror
As I'm the ghastly figure in the mirror

Struggling With My Imagination's Running Shoes

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me on this four lane highway 
my mind is blank and immune, at the moment, to all sounds period

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me at this unfamiliar exit
my mind is concretely focused, at the moment, on all thoughts of her

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me every degree from all emotional sides of my car
my mind is spinning dizzily, at the moment, when i brake slowly at the sight of her house

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me circling around her neighborhood like a reluctant husband after work
my mind is on cruise control overdrive, at the moment, with selfish visions of 'what could have been'

here i am struggling with my imagination's running shoes
they have gotten me returning home to my Unexpected Dream Come True
my mind is on nothing as i rejoice while thinking about the rigid circle of circumstances that lead me to You....via the Lord....AMEN....
© Marty King  Create an image from this poem.

Confession

heeding the worst; lips 
he would rehearse; kiss 
purpose would hurt his-
heart it immersed; drips-
sweat and a forced breath
the words that his mouth bled- 
loud and dispersed; head; 
nose; can’t be reversed; dread; 
rose; slurred and dispersed; face- 
burns slow and they turn; red; prose; 

skin; skirt; eyebrows;
nails; bangs; tied blouse; 
face; flushed; dry mouths-
gasp at the air with a slight growl 
sun’s hold eased by the low ground 
still on the roof but the air drowns 
neither can breathe but they hear sounds;
seeking concretely to cry bounds 
leaking not speaking; their hearts pound;  

peak in, the bleak slims are feet from the brink- 
hymns now pink from the lean in, their ink-
now strings linked- end to end, so in synch-
resonant resin-drink leaking pen-head, a sea-
of red flesh entity, now they rest as they heave-
moving chest, shaking teeth, throats compress, then release; 

rosy mesh;
feign retreat;
sewn in flesh;
aching bleat;

Scenes of Life

A sneaky girl in the
 tiptoe, look over
 the window ... a disheveled doll
 almost loses everything in a wash ...

 Phenomenal music goes through
 my spine and my vibrations
 silent strings ...

 An astonishing scream from a
  powerful throat announces:
  the fruit seller ...

  A pet kitten protests
   in painful meow by heat
   and shelter ... evil men
   they do the ball ...

   A light cut makes the street hell ...
   Everyone seeks sailing, light ...
    but not the clarity ....

    Scandalous and sassy garbage
    crosses the sidewalk causing
    my anger and overshadowing my
    joy ... Things that touch
   any sensitivity ...

     The sun is sort of cold,
     after the stupendous gale ...
     I manage to arrange blankets
     of clouds for him ...!
  
      A plant sprouts in the middle
       to solid concrete ...
       concretely, it is a miracle!
    
      I look at the sky and I feel dizzy
       with such greatness ...
       it's God's wonder ...

Premium Member Freed Verse Concretely

C   H   R  I   S   T        S                              
                     S                                           O                             D
                 U                                                    N                L
            S                                                   
        E                                                                        R
   J                                                  
                                                                                 O
   S                                                                   W          F

        A                                                        E                       G
             V                                             H                                 O
                  I                                    T                                             D
                      O                                                                             
                           U    R      O   F

Formula

To have the formula
   from the sweet word , I have honey
   of poetry, every day ...
    I lay in my  crystal bed
   and I fall asleep
   in the purest alchemy ...
   My poetic dreams
   they are concretely
   ethereal ... are colorful thoughts,
   live particles
   from Heaven ...
   I notice people as
   worked jewelry,
   sculpted works,
   recent flowers,
   lights sent ...!

A Short Letter About What You Can’t Define

My dear friend,

You ask about self-perception—about the simple music of saying who we are, what we dream, what small joys we cradle in our hands. It seems such an easy question, as gentle as asking the sky to name its favorite shade of blue, and yet for some souls it becomes a mirror too bright to look into.

There are those who cannot answer concretely, not because they are empty, but because they are afraid to be known. 
They have worn masks so long that their own features blur; they have mistaken admiration for love, and control for safety. 
To speak honestly of oneself requires a tenderness they once learned to fear.

But still, I believe every person carries a quiet truth—something like a lantern trembling in the dark. 
A dream remembered from childhood, a hobby that once soothed their wounds, a longing they dare not name. 
To coax these truths into the open is an act of compassion, not accusation.

If we ask gently, and listen without judgment, even the most guarded heart may find the courage to answer:
 “This is who I am, and this is what I have hoped for.”

With warmth and understanding, I am.

Existence of Silence In the Worlds

Silence is dressed in emptiness,
walk the opened paths
of further silences and absences...
Does not produce smells, and neither
spreads visions...
But it felt concretely
by the most thinking minds
and suffering creatures...
Noble but strange circumstance
this is the existence of silence
in all worlds... !

Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace