Remake Poems | Examples

Premium Member Echoes Unfolding Remake the Dawn

Dawn is rekindled
with shadow's memory taints
first light touches last—
the clock repeats each moment
time unbroken, circles whole

Insight can break walls
fences splinter; borders fade
voices burn with flame—
yet listening inclusive
re-shapes the field of conflict

What the hour discards
may conceal its tender core
child in bath water—
awareness rescues essence
past reborn in present tense

Memory reborn
old clocks glimmer in dawn's glow,
echoes in their place—
the past is not left behind
unfolded to becoming

Imagine waking—
to an endless horizon
future without bars
renewal becomes the seed
as daybreak remakes the sky

Musk is a Farley's Rusk

Demagogue not pedagogue

Aghast & agog

Perfidious insidious fog

Reeks of the past

Slog through the smog

Musk seeks to flog

Earth & its serfs

Downed & drowned

In his dystopian bog

Even starry nights

Elon’s neon satellites

Seedier media perch

Utter nutter besmirch

Thriving in the gutter

Conniving depriving church

Vex "X" & Tech T-Rex hex

Or next bogus Rogan

Bogan slogans prevails

Alpha male tales derails

Sod the planet’s scars

Cruise trips to Mars

Odd bod driverless cars

Spawn a fake Tarantino 

Remake.."Musk till Dawn"

Devil may care lair..

Loads of lies..skies chock a block 

With spies...all eyes on the prize

Everyone Everything Everywhere dies

Let's not parley with gnarly snarly

Musk...takes the mickey & the bicky

In the dock for running amok

Time guys he did finally own up

To being as grown up..

As a Farley’s Rusk (a British biscuit/bicky for a wee kiddy)


Premium Member Remake

I'll remake my small and simple gift for you with more love.
I'll slowly prove myself a gift of love sent from above.
I'll gradually show you my love without the old push and shove.

My Hearts Garden

Crafts loves this is a mystery I see
I didn’t know I suffer the same fate
I too have a garden, mahogany
Vines twist rocks onyx and alabaster
Oaks and ember leaves in zeal flutter light
Azure sky cast a mirror reflection below
Teardrop in the serene meadow this day
Ripples it all a sepulcher tomb gray
I want to know beauty but lack the view
My breast beat is this and this is charcoal
I can’t write gardens like you, I lack hue
That’s why this place is a cemetery

Premium Member God Renew a Newness In Me Soften Remake My Stoney Heart-

 I am dirty
I am a molded creature
A mammal
My heart is fixed
My body dirt, my body clay
I was  made by the hands of a mighty, mighty KING
creator of ALL and EVERYTHING
I have a beating heart
Helps flow my beating parts
My heart is flesh
Yet my soul is spirit
I am dirty
I have a cold harden heart
Yet still beating
I am dirty
My heart is fixed
What's left
must I repent
O' Father, Abba Father
remold me, caress my stony heart
Kiss me Father breath into my nostrils parts
Redefine me, remold me into a newness of you
I am dirty
I am a molded creature
A mammal
My heart is fixed
My body dirt, my body clay
I was  made by the hands of a mighty, mighty KING
creator of ALL and EVERYTHING
I have a beating heart
Helps flow my beating parts
My heart is flesh
Yet my soul is spirit
I am dirty
I have a cold harden heart
Yet still beating
I am dirty
Oh! God wash me
Hold me
Renew me and mold me
Maken unto me a renewed better image of you


Her Remake

Many time little things
Convert in big thought
Just hard effort needed
On right path
So first understood 
Vision of love and dream
One day your love dream 
Give you her view
So with the hope
Move with the dream
If your vision is true
She will appear as alive art
Darkness of heart touch starry night
Whole sky show you color of lighted delight
So do the wait for real happiness
God is trying to make her remake
Poet- anurag sharma      
DG-1 flat no 27 B  first floor         
Vikas puri new delhi-110018
         Email- draditiadi@rediffmail.com
        Mobile no-8743082486

Remake the World

The great texts
Never condemn their sins
Rulers of the world
Remake this world
Spiced with truth and justice

Premium Member I Walk Alone - 1 Year Remake

Here as I wander
Down the empty path of life
I desire all that I can not have
I desire nothing at all

Here as I wander
I peer into houses I pass
You are all by the fireplace
Warmed by the comfort of those you love

Here as I wander
Down empty streets
I am bitten by the cold of night
I walk alone, a graveyard off in the distance

The raven circles
A full moon exposed between the clouded mists
I am enticed by the eerily silence of death
I now walk with vigor, I see where I belong

I kiss the earth of my new home
Now I may finally repose
Torments freed, savor the black rose
I lie upon the cold slab


I rest in peace

Premium Member A Futuristic Wizard of Oz Remake

I found myself in Kansas, and with dread
saw endless rows of wheat ahead of me,
and so I clicked my slippers, ruby red,
and landed in the role of Dorothy.

Small folks with suckers sang me a sweet song.
Then finally I learned where I must go.
A road of yellow brick I skipped along
beside a lion, tin man and scarecrow.

In Oz I met a wizard not too bright
and wished to be in Kansas once again.
I clicked my heels and then a blinding light
transported me where rice grew on a plain.

A Chinese from two-thousand-twenty-four
said, “Girl, this no be Kansas any more.”

Epilogue: Everyone knew Chinese
and there was Universal Health Care.

Written by Andrea Dietrich/Aug. 27,2012

Inspired by Michael J. Falotico's
"Close your eyes and click your heels" Poetry Contest

Remake of the Chorus of the Song 1,000 Miles

now i wonder
if i could kiss you in the night
do you think i could turn back time
because you know i'd apologize a thousand times
just to hug you
just to kiss you
tonight

Knowing Remake

Death by morning death by night 
All I know is I die tonight 
death is here death is there 
Death follows me everywhere 
Death is here death is now 
I already know that someone will drown 
I know that it might sound bad 
I know how I die and I'm kinda glad 
I know its comming I know its soon 
I know that it might be you
Knowing the truth and what I see 
weather its you or weather its me 
I guess we'll just have to see
In the morning if I awake 
Than I know it was a mistake
I know it is bad but I'm glad
It was you and not me 
The rest is fate can't you see
You might know in your heart
Of your death how it starts
But when it happens its not up to me
Its all fate can't you see 
knowing this and knowing that 
I am just stating fact. 




Guardian Angel (In Other Word Remake of One Winged Angel)

I hold the weight of the world on my wings
I move surely but silently
No part of this feels like a dream
Somehow I'm still able to fly so lightly
Does the world not weight?
That it makes no difference on me
Perhaps the timing is late
Perhaps I've grown carefree
No matter what, I'll keep on flying
Making sure not to look back
Looking forward shine's brightly
For I've all ready flown my past
This much is true
I'll keep flying even when the skies are not blue

Lost Childhood/Remake of Childhood

Childhood lost but never knew why,
many nights I had laid and I'd cried.
Where was Dad, what's wrong with Mom?
I always knew something was wrong.Mean spoken words with raging fists,
something nobody could ever miss.
How could she treat her kids that way?
I swore that soon I'd leave one day.
Abuse is never easy to take,
this I know by no mistake.
Couldn't leave my sisters behind,
someplace else for them I'd find.
I promised I'd never let them feel,
the things I couldn't believe were real.
Once I found that place they could go,
I'd go somewhere nobody would know.
It's bad enough they had to see,
all the things that were done to me.
Once we left we stayed away,
with very little left to say.
Later now that time has passed,
many questions never asked.
Now as a Mom I just don't know,
how someone could let them self just go.
Never could I strike my child,
that is something oh so wild.
All I can say is I'll never forget,
still wonder if she feels regret.

Bed Time Remake

Twinkle twinkle little cutie. 
Off to bed, or I'll bust your booty. 
How I wonder what your dreaming.
Awh peace and quiet. 
No more screaming.

The Piano Man (Remake)

The mystic eyes of sorrow blue,
his voice does sing a tender blue.
And skin be merely white as porcelain
and turned to cream as tears prick his cheek.
He sings a solo from his soul for he is the piano man.

His bony fingers rubs on scales,
And drinks a bottle of fine white wine.
And toasts to the guests who watch
his lips sing dry and plays a note to intertwine
the following tune... because he is the piano man.

And the man in black of fine wool cloth,
mourns his story-telling song of Emily, his daughter,
a gonning bless. Yet he strengthens to play an art
because its from soul, and he's the piano man...

The piano man tickles the tips of each pale finger
and rubs across each note or key, along the scale.
his voice does sing a tender blue that tears my eye.
And all left alone to his saddening song makes me fall in love
with the a strong hearted man, the piano man.

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