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dawn

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Echoes Unfolding Remake the Dawn

Dawn is rekindled
with shadow's memory taints
first light touches last-
the clock repeats each moment
time unbroken, circles whole

Insight can break walls
fences splinter; borders fade
voices burn with flame-
yet listening inclusive
re-shapes the field of conflict

What the hour discards
may conceal its tender core
child in bath water-
awareness rescues essence
past reborn in present tense

Memory reborn
old clocks glimmer in dawn's glow,
echoes in their place-
the past is not left behind
unfolded to becoming

Imagine waking-
to an endless horizon
future without bars
renewal becomes the seed
as daybreak remakes the sky
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Alex Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 1:30 AM
"Imagine waking— to an endless horizon" - Grand, indeed!
Anderson Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 9:40 AM
Thanks very much for the feedback. Cheers and Best Wishes
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