Immersion Poems | Examples

Immersed

A gaze so tender,
Even from afar so amber,
Heart jumping in aflutter,
How can a person so much render,
In perfect voice and eyes so wanting,

Taking my time to grace this occasion,
Extending my hands in persuasion,
Allow me this invasion, 
I am willing to be indicted
Of this love accusation. 

© Written Whispers

Culture Immersion

Beaming big flowers
Outfit dress with foreigners
Respect the nomads.


Immersion

Japan autumn
east forest gold portrait

spicy ramen

Immersion

my liquid imagination
sweeps past boundaries
and risks the depths

in a moment
stolen from chaos
spirals of light
defy form
and warm my senses

there is blue
I'm sure

the blue that belongs
in peace
and it came to me
beyond reasoning

through a veil
of preconception
it yawned
and stirred

I became it
we became one
no need for answers
as if......
no question could occur

Premium Member Morning Immersion Haiku


Gardenia candle
Gold flickers on bath waters
Hypnotic,sweet peace


5/7/2023


Premium Member Being Thrown Into Immersion School

Slip all batty zing ump ash
Flip ball catty bing bump bash
Clip doll fatty ding dump dash
Sip caul hatty bring chump crash
I stare at the speaker, wishing I knew what to do or say

Hip haul natty ping grump hash
Quip mall ratty ping grump rash
Strip paul slatty string stump slash
I hear the words but they make no sense
For I do not know the language or understand

My parents threw me into full immersion school
Where I do not speak the language in any form...
I do not understand, and I doubt I ever will.

Premium Member Immersion In the Story

Staying immersed in 

The story..

A story of immersion

And the seeming

Wish to escape the

Story..which is

Impossible because

The wish and attempts

Are the story too..

It's all story

But somehow the

Empty nature of the

Story may be sensed

Which can seem 

As a bit

Of heaven on earth..!

Premium Member Immersion Van Gogh

Immersion Van Gogh
His paintings are alive
I am loving this exhibit
A virtual tour but marvelous

I think of the real Van Gogh
and how amazed he would be
at how many of us
recognize his works

Immersion

Verse by verse i poured into you
   Sing me with your lips,in a voice full throated

  Dancing and whirling,all i know
  What else could be in love?

Drop by Drop i immersed in you
  Seedling of love will certainly sprout 

Spring is almost over
  and the love is well rooted
How can i die in penury?

In smokes i roam 
  and with ashes i settle
i am fascinated with my opulent lifestyle
    
  Feel the bliss of first summer rain
   and sink with me in ephimeral pleasures
   i am lost in your euphony

Death is not my end
   and my verses will be hard to forget
 My Coffin will be forever white
who else could be such immortal?

Dated:26/July/2021

Premium Member Splendid Immersions

strawberries in cream
basking in the gold sunshine
a deep diving duck

into tall green grass
a crowded garden's fragrance
caught out in the rain

the blackness of night
twinkling stars surrounding all
the world lost in time

Premium Member Immersion

The lark ascending on
an afternoon fawn--
sweet autumn Reverie

Premium Member Total Immersion

Imagine, if you can my dear, my body is
Like water that surrounds you, gentle in the morning
As you rise to consciousness' surface
And take your first breath of the new day,
For I (who always try to wake before you)
Am that living water that now holds your sleeping form
And listens to the language of sleep's rumbles
That cat-like, purr your pleasure to my touch,
Telegraph the peace you're feeling,
As my arms, my legs, and shape insinuate
Their way into your very dreams,
Adjusting to your slightest movement,
Mutual comfort moment's bliss.
Like liquid love, that fuels my being,
I feel my soul immersed in serving
Broad strokes that your dreams are painting,
The wholeness of the life you wake to,
The lover that you trust is real.

I have become silky cocoon 
Your undomesticated pupa spun
In service to your chrysalis,
Am not myself at all at last,
But servant to your adult form,
Proud husband of your winged flight.


Brian Johnston
April 11, 2016

Immersion

Where was love
in a dewdrop and rose
when your lips went dry.

The salt now speaks
of vacant eyes of a
covered nude.

Untitled my song. I
leave at your steps
for a waterfall.


Satish Verma

An Immersion of Perversion

It seems like there’s almost been
 a total immersion…
Of so many people engaging in perversion!

Many are “sin’s slave.” And don’t know what to do!
Be careful!  It could happen to me and you!

Just turn on the television! And you will find…
People with very warped and confused minds!

All you have to do is read Romans chapter one.
And you’ll see the “moral fabric”
 is being undone!

In this passage it makes it so very clear…
The wrath of God against evil is very near!

The wrath of God is revealed against unrighteousness!
He’s a God of truth!  And demands holiness!

No matter how many laws may say it’s “o.k.”
We need to really read 
what God’s word has to say!

God is here and he really wants to teach us…
No matter our sin…  He can always reach us!

The wages of sin is death…
But God gives life everlasting!
A victorious life in Christ…  
Is yours for the asking!

Why not serve the God who created
 the heavens above?
And be filled with his peace, 
mercy and love???

By Jim Pemberton

Premium Member Immersion

The fog lay muffling the greenery gray.
Weighing down the atmosphere, sentient sorrowing,
with the benevolent masking intent 
of Gaia’s heart.

Dampening, the forceful sound;
the torrent of the Mothers tears;
battering only the granite walls of her womb.
The indistinct tone hid a multiplicity of sin
both visual and auditory, keening.

The cloak covered a miasma 
of valley-trapped pollution, 
engulfing the optical plane;
creating a haven of rampant peacefulness.

Life immersed in the cleansing, the sorrow, the joy
of the universal gift bows in adulation 
of the effluent and affluent beauty 
absorbing the storms C tonal ring.

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