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Best Immersion Poems

Below are the all-time best Immersion poems written by Poets on PoetrySoup. These top poems in list format are the best examples of immersion poems written by PoetrySoup members


Premium Member The Clouds
"HOLDING HIS HAND"

*The Voice*
God, can I hold your hand and follow you?

"God's voice"
My child, it is I who will walk with you! You walked down...

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Categories: immersion, angel, beautiful, beauty, blessing,
Form: Narrative



Premium Member The Sensual Scent of Summer
Coconut tropical oil 
Glistening on my skin
The scent intoxicates me
As I bask in the sun
And drink in the beauty
Of the sparkling Mediterranean Sea

It’s only for...

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Categories: immersion, sea, senses, sensual, summer,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member On Loving the Literary Soup,,
When my spirit was fogged in gloom
After i impacted concrete; like a lead balloon

It lifted my strength as I started to write
Of a beautiful girls...

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Categories: immersion, friendship,
Form: Couplet
The Time of Autumn
I lay nude at sunset on a cliff above the sea.
Heaven and Earth erupt in red and orange brilliance.
A cool wind wafts over me smells...

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© Sam Toil  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersion, love, sexy,
Form: Free verse
Lifelines
A misty  reflection
in the mirror
of life


a fragile shadow
on the wall
of boundaries


A deep echo
in the tunnel
of thoughts

A  soft whisper
in the voice
of dreams


a broken emotion
in...

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Categories: immersion, confusion
Form: Light Verse



Late Night On Salisbury Ave.
The meadow's radiance gradually dimmed
and evening littered far and wide
it encouraged the unfamiliar 
and everything uncertain.

The night accelerated sounds of anticipation 
as a thousand strangers...

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© Angie Mae  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersion, faith, hope, imagination, life,
Form: Epyllion
Premium Member You Are the Dead Sea
You are the Dead Sea
You just take and take and take
Never giving back
Concentrated...with your needs
Buoyancy made of your pride

The one who enters 
Cannot dive into...

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Categories: immersion, allegory, relationship, sea,
Form: Tanka
Premium Member Nearby
Why must I hear
the tempting gurgle
Of the life giving stream 
A sound wet with promise
Of refreshment

Why must I see
The alluring rush of movement
Liquid heaven
An enticing...

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Categories: immersion, love, metaphor, water,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member the water fairy Ida Rentoul Outhwaite 1921
I follow the curve of the land
  forging a way that was already dictated
   falling whilst shackled to endlessness
  becoming as...

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Categories: immersion, art,
Form: Ekphrasis
Premium Member I'm not a sunbather, but
Sometimes
Poetic minds are pools
And we dive in
It's beautiful
To be appreciated
The poetic beads on your skin
Dry in the sunshine
As you bask, feeling fine
Immersion really is
All the...

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Categories: immersion, appreciation,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Seek the Lord - the Star of David Style
~ Seek  The  Lord  ~
( Star Of  David )




God
For sure
Knows  sees  all
Wants best  for  you
He  sure...

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Categories: immersion, christian, faith, hope, love,
Form: Free verse
Lord Ganesha Speaks
"Oh dear theist",
Thus spoke the lord from the distant skies.
It never matters me,
the size of my idol you worship.
I fail to see,
those lumps of colours...

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Categories: immersion, anger, dedication, devotion, god,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Finding Peace
The MAN
 -THE SPIRIT- 
       - THE SEED

All dwell in the same abode
In the  temple  
where they...

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Categories: immersion, beautiful, emotions, feelings, introspection,
Form: Chant Royal
Premium Member Ready, Set, Me
"Ready, Set, Me"
Content with the thought of honesty   
Never living life like this before
You think it is a travesty
I do this for richer...

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Categories: immersion, devotion, happiness,
Form: Diminished Hexaverse
History's Elegy--A Paeon To Monism
Slipping through the fingers of my mind,
all those vague perceptions 
of the "I" inside this body
will provide a strange parade 
behind the mirror of my...

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Categories: immersion, philosophy, universe,
Form: Free verse

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