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Immersion
Japan autumn
east forest gold portrait

spicy ramen...

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Categories: immersion, happiness, nature,
Form: Haiku
Teaching By Immersion
Teaching by Immersion
(A poem for my dad…)

When I was young
On the tiny island of Tonga
My dad taught me to swim
“Swim”
He said as he threw me 
From the back of the boat

As the water closed
Over my head
I felt
Free
I wasn’t afraid
I knew I could hold my breath...

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© Kim Irvine  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersion, education, seadad, me, water,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Total Immersion
Imagine, if you can my dear, my body is
Like water that surrounds you, gentle in the morning
As you rise to consciousness' surface
And take your first breath of the new day,
For I (who always try to wake before you)
Am that living water that now holds your...

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Categories: immersion, love,
Form: Free verse

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry



Premium Member Immersion Van Gogh
Immersion Van Gogh
His paintings are alive
I am loving this exhibit
A virtual tour but marvelous

I think of the real Van Gogh
and how amazed he would be
at how many of us
recognize his works...

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Categories: immersion, art,
Form: Free verse
Immersion!
The day the thoughts dashed the ground,
Rowing ambitions produced no sound.
Where emotions paralysed
Only tears but had dried.
Everything had come to an end,
The tragedy could not be mend.

Lost!lost!lost!
Everything is lost!
Nothing more left,
With my unfortunate pathetic fate.

I have lost my child,
In the mouth of the ancient wild
I...

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© Gargi Saha  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: immersion, deathlost, lost,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Being Thrown Into Immersion School
Slip all batty zing ump ash
Flip ball catty bing bump bash
Clip doll fatty ding dump dash
Sip caul hatty bring chump crash
I stare at the speaker, wishing I knew what to do or say

Hip haul natty ping grump hash
Quip mall ratty ping grump rash
Strip paul slatty...

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Categories: immersion, school,
Form: Free verse



Premium Member Immersion
The lark ascending on
an afternoon fawn--
sweet autumn Reverie...

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Categories: immersion, art, class, eulogy, music,
Form: Haiku
Premium Member Morning Immersion Haiku

Gardenia candle
Gold flickers on bath waters
Hypnotic,sweet peace


5/7/2023


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Categories: immersion, beautiful, flower,
Form: Haiku
Immersion
Verse by verse i poured into you
   Sing me with your lips,in a voice full throated

  Dancing and whirling,all i know
  What else could be in love?

Drop by Drop i immersed in you
  Seedling of love will certainly sprout 

Spring...

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Categories: immersion, beautiful, imagery, imagination, philosophy,
Form: Free verse
An Immersion of Perversion
It seems like there’s almost been
 a total immersion…
Of so many people engaging in perversion!

Many are “sin’s slave.” And don’t know what to do!
Be careful!  It could happen to me and you!

Just turn on the television! And you will find…
People with very warped and...

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Categories: immersion, depression, forgiveness, happiness, hope,
Form: Rhyme
Immersion
Where was love
in a dewdrop and rose
when your lips went dry.

The salt now speaks
of vacant eyes of a
covered nude.

Untitled my song. I
leave at your steps
for a waterfall.


Satish Verma...

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Categories: immersion, art,
Form: ABC
Premium Member The Immersion
at the speed of light
on a carousel of death
souls escape the flesh

Into an immersion filled with the love of loved ones
an the miracles of creator's creations..
all jagged questions smoothed to gilded responses
all barbs of confusion transforms into flowers of truth...
Upon the translucent soul palette of
God...unscented...

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Categories: immersion, angel, angst,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Immersion In the Story
Staying immersed in 

The story..

A story of immersion

And the seeming

Wish to escape the

Story..which is

Impossible because

The wish and attempts

Are the story too..

It's all story

But somehow the

Empty nature of the

Story may be sensed

Which can seem 

As a bit

Of heaven on earth..!...

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Categories: immersion, desire, happiness, i am,
Form: Blank verse
Premium Member Immersion
The fog lay muffling the greenery gray.
Weighing down the atmosphere, sentient sorrowing,
with the benevolent masking intent 
of Gaia’s heart.

Dampening, the forceful sound;
the torrent of the Mothers tears;
battering only the granite walls of her womb.
The indistinct tone hid a multiplicity of sin
both visual and auditory, keening.

The...

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Categories: immersion, nature
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Splendid Immersions
strawberries in cream
basking in the gold sunshine
a deep diving duck

into tall green grass
a crowded garden's fragrance
caught out in the rain

the blackness of night
twinkling stars surrounding all
the world lost in time...

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Categories: immersion, deep, flower, green, night,
Form: Haiku

Book: Reflection on the Important Things