Immersion

Japan autumn
east forest gold portrait

spicy ramen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Woods Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 10:44 AM
Yess! Keep up the poetry in few but powerful words... nice! Xo
Parker Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 12:36 PM
Share a bowl with hubs and see what happens, ;)
Goldsmith Avatar
September 6, 2024 at 11:21 AM
You have a "Smile" here with your write. Are you cooking??? Hooray!!! Have a fun day writing away..................
Parker Avatar
September 7, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Sushi for everybody!!!! :o))
Puddifoot Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 1:28 PM
i'm more of a fish 'n' chips kinda girl ;) nice haiku though
Parker Avatar
September 5, 2024 at 4:41 PM
Fish 'n chips IS England's Sushi!!! Wash it down with Boddington's Ale. Cheers! :o))
Romios Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 4:53 PM
Hey Almost, I liked this Haiku very much,because it paints a great picture of autmn visually, and with the scent of Ramen. A FaV Pangie
Parker Avatar
September 4, 2024 at 7:54 PM
Glad you like it, P. Ramen and Sushi...and Japanese Landscapes. Wow. :o))
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