Immersed

A gaze so tender,
Even from afar so amber,
Heart jumping in aflutter,
How can a person so much render,
In perfect voice and eyes so wanting,

Taking my time to grace this occasion,
Extending my hands in persuasion,
Allow me this invasion, 
I am willing to be indicted
Of this love accusation. 

© Written Whispers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Agustin Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 6:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 17, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Thank you for your kind words
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