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A gaze so tender, Even from afar so amber, Heart jumping in aflutter, How can a person so much render, In perfect voice and eyes so wanting, Taking my time to grace this occasion, Extending my hands in persuasion, Allow me this invasion, I am willing to be indicted Of this love accusation. © Written Whispers

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Date: 2/13/2025 6:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/17/2025 6:19:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words

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