Immersion

my liquid imagination
sweeps past boundaries
and risks the depths

in a moment
stolen from chaos
spirals of light
defy form
and warm my senses

there is blue
I'm sure

the blue that belongs
in peace
and it came to me
beyond reasoning

through a veil
of preconception
it yawned
and stirred

I became it
we became one
no need for answers
as if......
no question could occur
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Agustin Avatar
July 13, 2023 at 3:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "immersion" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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