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Splendid Immersions

strawberries in cream
basking in the gold sunshine
a deep diving duck

into tall green grass
a crowded garden's fragrance
caught out in the rain

the blackness of night
twinkling stars surrounding all
the world lost in time
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Wolf Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 11:57 PM
From 'strawberries in cream,' my wife's favorite, to 'the world lost in time,' you have me contemplating the universe! Thank YOU, Evelyn! Blessings, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
July 13, 2020 at 12:07 AM
My pleasure, Gershon. I love astronomy. It's so fascinating. I'm glad you liked this one. Thank you for your kind remarks. Blessings, Evelyn
Krutsinger Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 8:36 PM
Gorgeously penned Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
July 12, 2020 at 10:28 PM
I am happy that you think so, Caren. Thank you.
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