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strawberries in cream basking in the gold sunshine a deep diving duck into tall green grass a crowded garden's fragrance caught out in the rain the blackness of night twinkling stars surrounding all the world lost in time

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/12/2020 11:57:00 PM

From 'strawberries in cream,' my wife's favorite, to 'the world lost in time,' you have me contemplating the universe! Thank YOU, Evelyn! Blessings, Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/13/2020 12:07:00 AM

My pleasure, Gershon. I love astronomy. It's so fascinating. I'm glad you liked this one. Thank you for your kind remarks. Blessings, Evelyn

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/12/2020 8:36:00 PM

Gorgeously penned Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/12/2020 10:28:00 PM

I am happy that you think so, Caren. Thank you.