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Morning Immersion Haiku

Gardenia candle Gold flickers on bath waters Hypnotic,sweet peace 5/7/2023
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Goldsmith Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 11:57 AM
I love this Haiku write/picture/flower. As a child we had 2 Gardenia plants. Have a great day/week....................
Romios Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 12:20 PM
Luyou, Paula. I had one a few years ago. But then found out they are poisonous to cats. You knkwI have a cat,…and gardenias need sunlight. I so love, love them. I am glad you shared this about your plants. Thanks so much Gardenia Sistet, Pangie
Eagle Avatar
May 7, 2023 at 8:18 PM
A beautiful piece of creative work. The gardenia is an amazing plant with wonderful smelling flowers.
Romios Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 12:13 PM
Glens, I am with you, it’s an exotic erotic scene..Clean and delightful. Thank you for your kind words. I used to buy fresh ones at least once a week and float them in fresh water. The house was. Fresh smelling allthe time, Merci, Pangie.
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