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Immersion

Verse by verse i poured into you Sing me with your lips,in a voice full throated Dancing and whirling,all i know What else could be in love? Drop by Drop i immersed in you Seedling of love will certainly sprout Spring is almost over and the love is well rooted How can i die in penury? In smokes i roam and with ashes i settle i am fascinated with my opulent lifestyle Feel the bliss of first summer rain and sink with me in ephimeral pleasures i am lost in your euphony Death is not my end and my verses will be hard to forget My Coffin will be forever white who else could be such immortal? Dated:26/July/2021

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Date: 8/4/2021 7:25:00 PM
Aamir, congrats on your fantastic win with your creatively descriptive write! Blessings Kim M
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Aamir Khan
Date: 8/4/2021 9:33:00 PM
Thank you such dear kim merryman
Date: 8/3/2021 7:58:00 PM
The last four lines are really superb. Congratulations on your win!
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Aamir Khan
Date: 8/4/2021 5:05:00 AM
Thank you so much dear.My perpetual commentar.?