Breathing Space Poems | Examples

Premium Member Sunny-Side Up

The Summer sun shimmered upon the lake.
Sunny-side up, the sky, the brightest soak.
Its reflection - a breathing space intake.
Stay on the path for its easy, light yolk.

The darker side, with two-sail boat, deep sighs.
In awe of ebb and flow, in Spirit’s glide.
In the shadow of God, in morning rise,
before your chores call you - a soothing ride.

Serenity is deep and wide. A smile
of warmth before the Fall. Glass eyes glisten.
Your heart, is calm, in solitude. Do wile
away the day, to soothing splash. Listen…

Lax days, upon the sea and sky, compose.
You hide in God’s glory - swaddled shadows.
Form: Sonnet

Premium Member Peoples peace day

Listen intently..' peace.)
Munitions roar' the worlds mouth!
Utter death! and denial.'

Much life is lost, too bad.!
How do we count? In evil score?
Let us wipe the slates clean.!

Dared to smile' to think?
Open a vista, the chink of plates
This cup overflow' cease.'

Awaken all peoples
To explore of each chance? piece'
Let it fall, in laps today !

Denying gloom, deny hate'
Give hope a breathing space
Listen intently.'  Peace!
Form: Haiku


Premium Member Umber

Through mist and rain I walk the pier
Truly my favourite time of year
Umber sky and umber ocean
All chaotic frenzied motion.

Heaving waves foam and spume
Dance macabre without a tune
Seagulls screech duck and dive
Energised feeling briskly alive.

Turbulent view is painted umber
Seascape beguiles it's full of wonder
This is my time my happy place
Perfect freedom with breathing space.



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Umber is an interesting pigmentation with many facets not just earth brown.
Form: Couplet

Premium Member My Sanctuary

 Forests are my safe sanctuary,
where among trees I find breathing space;
I find refuge when I need to be solitary.
Down green hued paths are bird songs merry,
each view, smell and sound I embrace;
forests are my safe sanctuary.
The wind flows over me fresh, cool and airy,
and I love the wildflowers like Queen Anne's lace;
I find refuge when I need to be solitary.
In nature all my sadness and grief I can just bury,
finding instead a portal to a magical place;
forests are my safe sanctuary.
I stop to rest and eat some wild raspberry,
noticing how the sky, clouds, and trees interlace;
I find refuge when I need to be solitary.
In time my soul and mind is no longer weary,
and I am left with nature's blessing and grace;
forests are my safe sanctuary,
I find refuge when I need to be solitary . . .  

____________________
August 14, 2022

Poetry/Villanelle/My Sanctuary
Copyright Protected, ID 08-1480-054-14
All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France

Premium Member Tendencies

TENDENCIES
too perfect
  flawless
virtuousness
   in thrall
 to the moribund
superlative
to reinvigorate
   the enfeebled

concept of genius
 this exemplar
    of grace and harmony
 conceived
& inspired
since antiquity.

a tapestry
of shimmering threads
a satisfying
 breathing space
   thought-through
 immaculate
finished
intimate
 & sublime
subtle &
   restrained
tender
   as an embrace

THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
Form: Other


Mirror

I gaze intently at your face,
Many hair strands outta place,
Lipstick used to perfectly trace,
Lips tremble like heading to 1st base,
Instantly i need breathing space,
Overwhelmed by feelings of disgrace,
Nothing worthy to take the showcase,
No confidence left to lose or misplace,
Lots of bad memories i need to replace,
I gotta move this MIRROR from this space.
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Contemplations

slender
    amplified
diverse&
        natural
         connections

puddles
       in artful
distilled beauty
                 tranquil
light filled
       breathing space

exuberant
         essentials
in
simple lines

a delicate interplay
focused
on the
           moment
of spacious
         simplicity

celebrating colour
with transient
        beauty
in an essential
            palette

fading
  subdued
in a universal
         continuim
infused&
     contemplative

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Form: Other

Shimmering Genesis

breathing space drowns night

a wanderlust disaster

on a distant star
Form: Haiku

I Can'T Breathe

I am tired of trying to be cool
I am tired of crying like a fool
I am not born to be silent 
I am not born to be violent
But the fact that I'm dying
Is what I can't keep denying.

I can't die for nothing
So I will live for something
I am not a thug, let me be!
I am not a slave, set me free.
If I am treated like a predator
Expect me to act like a dictator.

Let me choose my reaction
If I can't change your action.
I can't quench fire with fire,
Can you stop starting the fire?
If my skin colour scares you
Your shadow is ashamed of you.

There is a place for every race,
Give black race some breathing space.
Racism is certainly not patriotism,
Add justice to your jingoism.
All lives matter when justice is served,
No race deserves to be severed.
Form: Rhyme

Living Space

Daylight slips in and out
of yellowing curtains,
as the sun blinks.
At such times
her thoughts 
appear and disappear

The old lady has planted
her mind in closets
where dreams wither,
in kitchen cupboards
where herbs and spices dust the dark.
She will leave what she can;
small packets once gardened
when she cared to cook.

It is coming -
a change of occupancy.
She senses strange feet
and slamming doors,
young laughter runs in and out
of her breathing space.

Until then, she is here
in her last chair
in a memory-seeded apartment,
listening to the history
of her tucked-away life.

Phobia

The phobia  

 Went to the Carnival in Loule I`m sure it was nice
 I felt like the branch of a tree hurtling down a river
 Of humanity a maelstrom, a headless monster and
I was filled with panic; a scream was working its way
Up my throat, I found a breathing space by a doorway
As the float with lightly dress girls came there was 
A surge towards the edge of the pavement a vacuum 
I was able to run and found a dark side- road where 
masked people with evil masks played with fire.
I found my way to a normal street I knew in a café had
A sandwich and drink water, I`m in a dry cycle seeing my 
Doctor at the end of the month and if she asks If I drink, 
I can honestly answer no.
This fear of throngs of people should not be taken lightly
But I was able to flee but also take a picture of the girls

Unwanted

She sometimes looked so cruel when angry
But she was always so beautiful when happy.
She was a little rebellious with life
But she made good concession all the times.
She was irritated with all her duties
But she would often make it run smooth.
She fussed, expecting more from him
But would finally rejoice in what she acquired.
She would fight me like a spoilt kid.
But she would look after me as usual.
She said she had too many kids
But would find her breathing space in some way.
She said she was not in the happiest home
But she would join in all the festivities.
She would taunt me like her rival
But I understood she was frustrated.
She recoils every time I want to help her
But I double my effort to please her.
She thought maternal love has robbed her  
But would make effort to be a mother.
I love her for what she is and has been
But she says today I was the unwanted child!
Well...I'm relieved she said it finally
But I say : GOD BLESS HER...

Premium Member 'temporary Season'

Grant yourself the opportunity to feel everything

Even when it feels like no one will ever realize 
How deeply you hurt 
That pain does not own you 
It is you at work 
Don't ever pretend 
You are content all the time 
That will curtail your growth 
We all need some breathing space 
In order for us to regroup 
Don't ignore the hurt 
Don't ignore that part of you 
That sometimes feels so empty 
Work through it 
Walk through it 

Even pain 
No matter what the cause 
Does not own you
It is like everything in life 
A temporary season 
Who you are after the process 
Will be your testimony

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Premium Member Postvictorian Cathedral

All ye who enter here
despairing statues of salted liberty,
merging solidarity with Earth’s poor hunger
to range free falling Victorian bricks
and mal-bourne sticks
to land here with now
with all arrived before you
prepared to grace Earth’s healthy breathing space
and time of BrickWork connecting sacred place,
restructuring minds co-infesting recomposing bodies,
bay to mountain swinging resonant designs
recycling Earth’s health-bourne habitation,
celebration
with all entering good humored here 
with bad tumored now
climates of each day’s great dissonant transition.

LifeWork EcoLogic draws history written by our stars.
BrickWorld Cathedrals incarnate Earth’s green musings
sung by sunlight’s empowering designers
of MultiCultural ReGenesis.

Seek within our lower reaches
to resolve with sensory roots 
reforming crowns
searching hidden ex cathedra gold,
deep beneath not-so-rushing,
lead headed crushing stone.

Conjoin these bricks
of nature’s rich vocation light,
regenerous
religious enbrightenment
to guide our humbled exodus
until we enter here once more
to sing and dance
among Earth’s ReGenerate Cathedrals.

Beautification Beans

Breathing space of time and place. Wishing waiting wanting wantonly. And a fried ham. Jellied eels do not erode in a milky ju. And segment of an oiled asparagus is not very funny for a spoon who arrives in a headdress at a ballroom. To tell a time off is to deny a denounced pink and purple acolyte of a flower . Bud then. Bead then. Braking beaming bombing being bringing basins. Hahahaha and now a chat to a cloth. Hahahaha and a jumping scarf doing the can can dance. Xxxx beautification z

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