Peoples peace day

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As you can see here I am trying to do more to Make some effect for peace I did this write as Close as I could to the 5 7 7 syllable count of Japanese poetry as there is either a 5 7 5 count Or a 5 7 7..' I hope others may write or do something, though small' yet all things can combine in a big way.!! ..May God bless each reader!

Listen intently..' peace.) Munitions roar' the worlds mouth! Utter death! and denial.' Much life is lost, too bad.! How do we count? In evil score? Let us wipe the slates clean.! Dared to smile' to think? Open a vista, the chink of plates This cup overflow' cease.' Awaken all peoples To explore of each chance? piece' Let it fall, in laps today ! Denying gloom, deny hate' Give hope a breathing space Listen intently.' Peace!

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/28/2024 11:17:00 AM

Wonderfully done, Joe. Your theme reminds me of the song Let There Be Peace on Earth with the memorable line "And let it begin with me." You have done just that in your impactful poem! Holy Week blessings to you. May your Easter be filled with blessings!

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/29/2024 12:29:00 AM

Well Sam..' Its great to see your comment today.' I don't Beleive i have had many from You, although we have both Been here years.. May the Lord bless you abundantly.'

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/19/2024 6:53:00 AM

Well composed. Enjoyed Have A Nice Day

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/21/2024 2:13:00 PM

And you Anisha, heres to a peaceful second if April.!

Marugu Mo

Date: 3/15/2024 1:17:00 AM

Well writ Senryu! I find it frustrating that the syllable counter is not integrated in the poem editing page.

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/15/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hello Marugu.' Thank you for finding time to comment'

Michael Tor

Date: 3/14/2024 9:30:00 PM

Excellent piece Joe. Thanks for sharing.

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/15/2024 12:06:00 AM

I am glad you think so Michael Yet no surprise, you have a Good grasp of what evil lurks.' In our dark world!

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/15/2024 12:06:00 AM

I am glad you think so Michael Yet no surprise, you have a Good grasp of what evil lurks.' In our dark world!

Bill Baker

Date: 3/14/2024 3:27:00 PM

Thanks for sharing an uplift and hopeful poem with us, Joe. You did a good job with the 5-7-5-, and 5-7-7 variations. Have a pleasant week, my friend! Bill

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/15/2024 12:02:00 AM

Thank you Bill, we trudge on..' I think i am speaking for others Here immersed in dystopia as well As me.' Yet I can't stop looking For a way to break free.!!

Joyce Faure

Date: 3/14/2024 1:37:00 PM

Denying gloom, deny hate' Give hope a breathing space Listen intently.' Peace! It touched me my dear Writer I enjoyed your work very much!

Joe Maverick
Date: 3/14/2024 2:02:00 PM

Joyce so glad to recieve your Comment here, I will visit your Page also..May I put this to you And all who read, I would like to do more.' Yet must do but what I Can.! Think of me as a runner? In A marathon.' And I'm holding a baton that I'm willing to pass to Those who are fitter 'in writing by Having time!' And I will be willing To run harder If I can recover as it Were.' I so do hope others will strike out put up a flagpole fly A ppd flag do whatever' yet do It while you can.!