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Living Space

Daylight slips in and out of yellowing curtains, as the sun blinks. At such times her thoughts appear and disappear The old lady has planted her mind in closets where dreams wither, in kitchen cupboards where herbs and spices dust the dark. She will leave what she can; small packets once gardened when she cared to cook. It is coming - a change of occupancy. She senses strange feet and slamming doors, young laughter runs in and out of her breathing space. Until then, she is here in her last chair in a memory-seeded apartment, listening to the history of her tucked-away life.

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Date: 2/8/2020 8:02:00 PM
Your writing is impeccable! Your contrasts and imagery on point!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/8/2020 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Kim, high praise indeed. Much obliged.
Date: 2/8/2020 10:14:00 AM
the transition is at hand...change is happening in the inner and outer....Nice write
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/8/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Arturo, I'm glad that you picked up on that aspect. Cheers.

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