Living Space

Daylight slips in and out
of yellowing curtains,
as the sun blinks.
At such times
her thoughts 
appear and disappear

The old lady has planted
her mind in closets
where dreams wither,
in kitchen cupboards
where herbs and spices dust the dark.
She will leave what she can;
small packets once gardened
when she cared to cook.

It is coming -
a change of occupancy.
She senses strange feet
and slamming doors,
young laughter runs in and out
of her breathing space.

Until then, she is here
in her last chair
in a memory-seeded apartment,
listening to the history
of her tucked-away life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/8/2020 8:02:00 PM
Your writing is impeccable! Your contrasts and imagery on point!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/8/2020 8:44:00 PM
Thanks Kim, high praise indeed. Much obliged.
Date: 2/8/2020 10:14:00 AM
the transition is at hand...change is happening in the inner and outer....Nice write
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Eric Ashford
Date: 2/8/2020 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Arturo, I'm glad that you picked up on that aspect. Cheers.
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