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The Summer sun shimmered upon the lake. Sunny-side up, the sky, the brightest soak. Its reflection - a breathing space intake. Stay on the path for its easy, light yolk. The darker side, with two-sail boat, deep sighs. In awe of ebb and flow, in Spirit’s glide. In the shadow of God, in morning rise, before your chores call you - a soothing ride. Serenity is deep and wide. A smile of warmth before the Fall. Glass eyes glisten. Your heart, is calm, in solitude. Do wile away the day, to soothing splash. Listen… Lax days, upon the sea and sky, compose. You hide in God’s glory - swaddled shadows.

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Date: 9/10/2025 4:35:00 PM
Hello Kim Rodrigues, ,I like this poem so m juch it will be my fav. Hugs./Darlene/
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Date: 9/5/2025 3:11:00 PM
"Serenity is deep and wide. A smile of warmth before the Fall.," This is deep and comforting. This poem is well penned.
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Date: 7/22/2025 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD! You've painted a beautiful picture of God's grace where heart is calm, in solitude. Keep your sunny side up! Thank you for sharing this blessed Sonnet, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/22/2025 12:15:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Anaya! xx
Date: 7/20/2025 11:39:00 PM
Congratulations Kim, on having received the honour of poem of the day for your wonderful sonnet. Keep the sunny side up… Beryl
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:32:00 AM
You made me smile “keep the sunny side up” Hugs and thank you, Beryl!
Date: 7/20/2025 10:30:00 PM
Very uplifting poetry, Kim. Congratulations on your fine POTD, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, dear Bill!
Date: 7/20/2025 10:04:00 PM
What a delightful uplifting write Kim….Congratulations on POTD! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:31:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/20/2025 6:09:00 PM
YAY!!! Congrats, Kim!! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 7/20/2025 4:48:00 PM
' The Summer sun shimmered upon the lake. ' A moment that feels magical, while being beautiful and awe-inspiring all at the same time. Your thoughts bring a smile, Kim. Worthy of Poem of the Day. Congratulations my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:30:00 AM
Thank you so much for your kind words! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 7/20/2025 4:16:00 PM
Kim. Just wonderful. Congratulations on POTD! Warren
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Warren!
Date: 7/20/2025 3:31:00 PM
Back to write congratulations on your well deserved p.o.t.d :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Abdullah!
Date: 7/20/2025 2:16:00 PM
You certainly are one of the genuine believers on this site that always has their sunny side up Kim, your beautiful poem paints an even more beautiful picture, congratulations on a well deserving POTD, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:29:00 AM
I appreciate you so, dear David! Thank you!
Date: 7/20/2025 12:11:00 PM
- The "Sunny-Side Up" here ... enjoying an unusually warm month of July ... a lovely poem, Kim :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:28:00 AM
July is a blast, blst of Summer heat for sure! Thank you, sweet poet!
Date: 7/20/2025 10:57:00 AM
This is uplifting and magnificent, Kim! Congratulations on POTD. Sunny smiles and hugs. :D
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:27:00 AM
Sunny sweet you! Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 7/20/2025 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write. I have been off the computer for a few days. Have a blessed day with your wonderful win.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:27:00 AM
I wasn’t on much yesterday. Hugs and thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/20/2025 6:04:00 AM
Positive, uplifting read this morning Kim. Enjoy your turn in the sunlight
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:26:00 AM
The inspirartion photo was beautiful. A sweet cousin had posted. Thank you, Tom!
Date: 7/20/2025 6:01:00 AM
Dear Kim, a beautiful poem! Such wonderful writing! Absolutely worthy of POTD! Warmest congratulations on POTD, my dear friend! Enjoy your special day! Best, Anne
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:25:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Anne!
Date: 7/20/2025 5:01:00 AM
Kim, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:25:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 7/20/2025 4:43:00 AM
Dear Kim, back to say congratulations on such a marvelous poem. Yeah! Summer Blessings, Dear Kim, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:25:00 AM
Summer blessings to you, dear Daniel! Thank you!
Date: 7/20/2025 4:21:00 AM
returning to congratulate you, Kim, on your POTD designation. Well done and well deserved.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:24:00 AM
Thank you, dear Sara!
Date: 7/20/2025 3:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning POTD, Kim. A wonderful piece and a great write. Wishing you a blessed day.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:24:00 AM
Thank you! Hope you had a wonderful weekend!
Date: 7/20/2025 2:46:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet, delightful imagery, Kim, warmest congratulations on POTD
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, dear one!
Date: 7/20/2025 12:53:00 AM
Dear Kim, this is absolutely exquisite — your words shimmer like the summer sun you describe. I felt wrapped in the stillness and the Spirit’s gentle presence, especially in lines like “In the shadow of God, in morning rise.” Congratulations on your POTD on this gem...Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, Maria!
Date: 7/20/2025 12:50:00 AM
Very nice Kim. Congratulations on your potd! Oh if it’s for contest best wishes!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:23:00 AM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 7/19/2025 4:30:00 PM
a delightful sonnet, Kim. I especially like the 3d verse. Best wishes with the contest. Faving.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2025 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 7/19/2025 1:08:00 PM
Wonderful sonnet! A favorite :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/19/2025 1:24:00 PM
Thank you, Abdullah!
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