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She sometimes looked so cruel when angry But she was always so beautiful when happy. She was a little rebellious with life But she made good concession all the times. She was irritated with all her duties But she would often make it run smooth. She fussed, expecting more from him But would finally rejoice in what she acquired. She would fight me like a spoilt kid. But she would look after me as usual. She said she had too many kids But would find her breathing space in some way. She said she was not in the happiest home But she would join in all the festivities. She would taunt me like her rival But I understood she was frustrated. She recoils every time I want to help her But I double my effort to please her. She thought maternal love has robbed her But would make effort to be a mother. I love her for what she is and has been But she says today I was the unwanted child! Well...I'm relieved she said it finally But I say : GOD BLESS HER...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/7/2017 6:42:00 AM
God bless your mother, the vessel he used to bring you here. Don't worry about her recoil, she probably had her own plans when you came. I admire the fact that you "double your efforts" to please. Show her maternal love has not robbed her in all you do. May this new year bring yourself and family much joy in festivities and more. ?? Hugs Rainbow.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/7/2017 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for the read Rainbow, this comment is so deep and touching. Appreciate what you felt the poem. You reflect you name here...a promise of rainbow..Thanks again. God bless you. :)
Date: 1/5/2017 10:11:00 AM
We all are wanted in some way, I enjoy each line of the poem. each line said something very expressive.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/5/2017 10:28:00 AM
Thanks friend for the visit and so nice comment. Glad you enjoyed it. All the best. Liked your poems...:)
Date: 1/2/2017 6:08:00 PM
God wanted you and therefore he placed you carefully in your mother's womb. Blessings to you and your mother.
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/3/2017 2:07:00 AM
Truly said...this is a bare fact. Thanks friend for the nice comment. :)
Date: 1/2/2017 5:09:00 AM
A powerful piece of prose, Sunita...The last four lines are especially poignant - Very well penned! My best wishes for your New Year...May it be a contented and fruitful one. :) john
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Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 1/2/2017 10:00:00 AM
Thanks friend for going through and leaving such a nice comment.Happy new year to you too. :)

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