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Premium Member FATHER TO ELDER SON: ONCE MORE AGAIN

FATHER TO ELDER SON: ONCE MORE AGAIN   

I am your father;
Let me not be a bother,
Nor your enemy:
Please come and visit with me;
My time here will soon not be:-

The compass of God,
Has never led one astray;
Satan’s does—each day:-
Be in God’s navigation;
And love’s resurrection:- 

Have mercy on me,
And forgive me for my sins 
Against God and thee:- 
Love you more than you can know; 
Forgive me before I go:-

Forgiveness of me
Is not about forgetting;
It’s about mercy:
For the pain you’ve given me, 
God knows, I’ve forgiven thee. 

I’ll die loving you,
I have lived life loving you:
God guiding me on:-
And as death takes me further,
Pray tell, greets from your brother:-

Premium Member REFLECTION OF A WATERED ELDER

REFLECTIONS OF A WATERED ELDER

                                                IN AND OF WE GREENS  ?? 

                                                Like the bright green grass,
                                                We continue onward growth:
                                                God, fertilizing.

Our youth, moist and fresh,
Are in dire need of being dried and
Cured to withstand today's trying times.

Void of Rights of Passage–barely rooted
And anchored in the sustaining energy
Of ourstory, our youth have become like
Unchartered ships in aimless serpentine waters, 
Whorlwinding in a socio-psycho, bigoted cesspool:-

      In Proverbs and Psalms
       It has been collectively written:
       “Train a [child] in the way
       [They should go…[and] that the Lord
       Is [the] light in [their] salvation;
       [Whom] should [they] fear?”

The resurrection of the Village waits,
And the youth too; come, fellow elders,
Let us mirror and reflect ourstory’s journey
In a way our youths may envision their
Present-day destination: Least we fail
In ourstory’s present journeying:- 

  ??: Extended family name

Premium Member for you the elder willows will still weep

sweet spring awakens earth from winter sleep 
with bold shouts of color playfully laid
on flowers, chirping birds and butterflies~ 
for you the elder willows will still weep,
and here in softness of the springtime glade
our nature's own dear Mother will advise

those who come with heavy heart’s hopeless pleas, 
those whose love of life has been sudden frayed 
by winter's last cold storm in human guise~
now you may take ease 
storms have made you wise.


My Brave Heir

They said we were liars
Burnt away all our cities
But even with these fires
I still felt the cool breeze

My little star, don’t ever fall
Run before the sky hits dawn
I’ll be here to catch you now
Even if I don’t know how

They won’t take the motherland
The home of us all
 
Don’t let them lay their hands on you
I’ll keep you safe, it’s very true
And as the sun sets tonight
You’ll beat cancer in this fight

And when our leader screams your name
Or if this place goes down in flames
Just call for some help from me
And together we’ll run free

Gymnosophists

Pliny, the elder, heard
About beavers
And their magical testicles
From a vagrant 
Russian merchant.

On his bestiary 
He also praised unicorns
And the naked
Gymnosophists
Of the far Orient;
The vagabond sages
Who only ate
Once a year
And beans at that!
(Like my mother used to say:
“Everywhere in the world
People eat beans.”)

One of these hierophants
Spoke for trees
And interpreted
Their seed spread
As omens.
(Some truth to that:
Seed pods harbinger
Drought and merry times.)

Yes, Pliny
Wrote what he heard
And wrote much of it
So much that my toponymic 
Ancestral brethren,
In Hispania Tarraconensis,
Wanted it all that wisdom
For themselves.

Premium Member Mother's Kitchen

the greatest classroom 
I ever sat in 
was my mother's kitchen 

she said 
give what you want 
if you get it back stay 
if you don't leave

she said 
you might not ever get a degree in law
but you damn well better 
get a degree in people

she said 
you cannot 
have an independent mouth 
and a dependent ass

she said 
don't criticize 
the recipe 
only criticize the dish

she said 
marriage is like 
a construction company 
you are supposed to build things
 
she said 
the devil 
does more harm with a lie 
than a knife or gun

she said 
you may not believe in God 
but if you look in my eyes 
you will see the results

the greatest classroom 
I ever sat in 
was my mother's kitchen
 
and I 
graduated 
Summa cum laude


Premium Member Dignity Of An Elder Dog

Master, my eyes now have cataracts,
my bones ache and stiffen when I rise,
I cannot chase squirrels like I used to,
nor fetch a tennis ball the way I did
as a pup,
but I love living with my family,
and the gentle pats on my head.

Though the long walks have shortened,
and there's gray fur on my muzzle,
I enjoy napping more during the day.
Master, thank you for taking me to 
the vet,
for my health and comfort.

The sun filters through the window warmly,
as I recall seeing the children grow up,
I have the dignity of an elder dog,
blessed by God to be with my kind 
human companions,
who adopted me from an animal shelter. ~

Premium Member haiku



newborn youthfulness
natures juxtaposition
now elder wisdom

Premium Member As We Grow Older

Growing older is a carousel  
of highs and lows, each spin a memory, each turn a change.  
It’s the morning ache in places you never thought could hurt,  
the pizza you once devoured now a restless night’s companion.

Your vision softens, sounds blur,  
and the quiet hum of life’s smaller details becomes elusive.  
Doctors' visits and pill bottles mark the passing months,  
while hair thins, and skin loosens where once strength resided.

Nights grow lighter, dreams grow heavier  
with visions of a younger self, running through the past.  
The faces of friends and family fade, some taken too soon,  
others by the slow hand of time, all leaving empty chairs.

Yet gratitude remains a quiet current,  
a whispered song beneath the noise of change.  
For the laughter still brightens days, the tear still falls,  
reminding us of what remains, what we hold close.

Elder sister

She handled it all,fiercely 
She stood as support, strongly 
The iron pillar, 
Shielding them from unfamiliar. 
Handling responsibilities 
Kicking off the insecurities.
Marking her territory 
Making mistakes 
Teaching lessons bravely. 
Many roles she played 
Second mother she was called. 
Being parent to parents 
Being breadwinner in many.
Sacrifices she made
For being son to many.
Yet she took it all
Fought the fall
Bounced back again and again.
She's the first born 
The Elder sister 
No appreciation, but
Still took it all on her shoulder.

Premium Member My 120 pound house guest

He's an elder now so don't dare forget.
He has special needs and they need to be met..
Always been a hot boy so keep the thermostat down,
or he'll gulp too much water and in urine you'll drown..
Never was a barker but now lets you know.
Better pay attention or he'll just let it flow..
The laminated flooring makes his joints ouch and
his old bones can no longer reach the soft couch.
He needs carpeting or bedding to lie down and slouch..
Those short walks are great but his back legs go out.
Make sure it's flat surfaces with no hills to mount..
A breakfast and a dinner, let his nose lead the way,
and this 120 pd dog is happy and sleeps the rest of his day.

Premium Member Elder-Less Earth

Never thought I'd live long enough to see a holocaust.
A holy slip of land whittled into a divining rod for carnage and death.
The footsteps of Jesus filling with blood and moral decay.
Perfect words lost in the throat of scorched earth days.

If the elders weren't busy  
{slaughtering each other gleefully}.
Their children would be playing hide and seek, amongst the olive trees.
There would be instantaneous peace...for the first time in history.
No more boots on the ground or purge in the air... 
Only the sound of merry, going round and round without a care.

Unstoppable Elder O Anyunku

A gem I taught in his school
And under him grabbed the rule:
An Igbo man from Okpo,
Whose enemies she shot “Kpoo!”

With him you don’t around fool:
He’d begin to lose his cool.
Staff learnt to submit their notes,
Even if one had twelve coats
But with same staff reveled
And with that up things leveled…

No intimidating him -
His wine glass fills to the brim;
To me a Second Father
That should’ve been First rather…

When Okpo had wars Radar
But would not burst foe’s bladder;
For himself raised sweet children,
Who avoided hot Cauldron: 
A hero engineer son,
Who goes out to meet the Sun
And a lawyer daughter
One might rate Cleanest Water…

Just recently lost his wife;
Death has walked in with its knife!

But he’s the unstoppable 
Forever capable!

Premium Member Panagiota Romios -POTW

Panagiota Romios

Spirited, elaborate and gracefully 
She weaves with ease her poetry
Wistful, yet strong, carries her own 
A starry queen on her exalted thrown        
She writes to please
Puts minds at ease
Cinnamon and peppermints, I wish her well
Flowers and dance for mademoiselle 
A true patriot, all Americana
A loving mother and Nana 
Sadly, I drifted away from the poetess
Too busy in my world of selfish distress
Engaging in on a realization 
That she fights for all and on occasion
At worldly events she has a feel                                          
Who can dishonor a woman so real
I’ll read her poems and hear her song
The innocent lady, whose was right all along

Premium Member When I Look Back

Amelia Romero NM
a daughter

When I look back
I relive petty torments
The way you teased me
The way I displeased you
The scars I needn’t show
With nowhere else to go
Avoided you miserably
Your need for turbulence 
had held me hostage 
Your drama
Day by day 
Flashes of you
Only glimpses of possibility
Vows of a better life 
When I look back

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