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As We Grow Older

Growing older is a carousel of highs and lows, each spin a memory, each turn a change. It’s the morning ache in places you never thought could hurt, the pizza you once devoured now a restless night’s companion. Your vision softens, sounds blur, and the quiet hum of life’s smaller details becomes elusive. Doctors' visits and pill bottles mark the passing months, while hair thins, and skin loosens where once strength resided. Nights grow lighter, dreams grow heavier with visions of a younger self, running through the past. The faces of friends and family fade, some taken too soon, others by the slow hand of time, all leaving empty chairs. Yet gratitude remains a quiet current, a whispered song beneath the noise of change. For the laughter still brightens days, the tear still falls, reminding us of what remains, what we hold close.

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Date: 5/17/2024 5:00:00 PM
Your poem resonated with me, Don! I liked how you described 'getting older,' for it is indeed a carousel and sometimes I find myself still trying to reach for the brass ring knowing that physically I no longer can. There was a bittersweet tone to your poem that was filled with insight and wisdom. The last verse was uplifting and shows balance in your character and poetic voice. Am faving! Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
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Don Iannone
Date: 5/17/2024 9:46:00 PM
Hi Sara, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Life is always bittersweet, even when we are young. Balance never came easy in my life. It’s a daily effort for me. Writing poetry helps me tune into myself, hope you’re well! Thank you. Best wishes, Don

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