Coma Poems | Examples

thy worldith thy endith ith

thy worldith isith thy canvasith.
thy painterith thy paintith.
thy poetith, makeith thy poetith.
thy worldith thy endith.
chickenith jockeyith.

Premium Member collective coma

flaming snakes
bite the Hanged Man

plodding sky swallows a squirrel 
clinging to a gnarly tree

blemished pens bemoan 
wily wordplay 

out of nowhere 
i am sadly too late

they have built the battlefield
in a collective coma

i build sorrow
my words disappear

one gloats madly
i go savagely into twilight

the Wheel of Fortune
spins into the Sun

Velvet Coma

Velvet Coma
 Slumber to ponder.
 Die to find you.
 However long it takes.
 All wait by your bedside.
 I’m writing you a letter.
 Rest like a feather.
 The only one I love.
 Deep emotions.
 A hug forever.
 I would take your dying place.
 I can’t live without you.
 Waves calm and beautiful.
 Memories Azure, water front.
 Could never fathom leaving you.
 My soul mate.
 All stay up late.
 Squeeze my hand when you're awake.
 Heaven holds us everyday.


Coma

The doctor had a worried face.

He asked me how I let it get this bad, and how I could be so stupid.

I really can’t remember…

I tried to tell him I was sorry, but I don’t think I could speak.

He says I should sit.

Sitting hurts my soul.

He says I should lie down.

Lying down is scary.

Somehow I’m more dizzy lying down too.

Just lie down and sleep…

It feels like I’m slipping into a coma.

So at first I fought my exhaustion.

Until a coma started to not sound that bad.

Maybe I would wake up a few months from now.

And everything would be ok.

But no, I was going to wake up tomorrow.

And the nightmare will start.

Premium Member Comma No Coma

Comma no coma, we just pause
Silence enables bliss
Fears and desires, suffering cause
We contract, serpents hiss

Slow dow hermit, slow down
Wipe of ego borne frown
In blissful rapture drown

Feel love’s aroma
Comma no coma

10-March-2023
Quietus

Favourable Coma

The person stuck on that memorable throne,
They are not too immune,
Twitching with suspicions,
A knife behind their back,
Soon they will be by your side,
A partner ready to behead,
Constant checks, Lonely Medicine,
The pool of influence,
Followed by infection,
The recovery time is raw,
Developing more than before,
The morale of their greatest actions,
Only a fraction of their innocent mind.


Premium Member Coma

*Image of Vulnerability by The Conversation.

Coma

Endeavoring eyes opened
to the nothingness ere it.

Harkening labyrinths aches
to the silence yond.

Alone spoke I and
loneliness echoed
in faint whispers.

There remains
a trace of me
airing silently

the breath of
belonging.


Inspired: 2022 March 28
*7th Place*
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 4
~~Mark Toney: Judged 2022 June 25
*1st Place*
A BRIAN STRAND 1098
~~Brian Strand: Judged 2022 March 30

Premium Member Climatic Coma

vocation to bloom
puzzled buds in dizziness ...
spring smiles soothingly


20 February 2022

Coma

She thinks I’m in a coma. 

It’s time for her to be gone.

She goes to the other room. 

Leaving my body behind.

My Guardian Angel

It was 1st July 2005
The day that changed my life
An holiday car crash terror
An experience of horror 
Quick dash to hospital port
Put straight on life support 
My conscience was asleep 
I could hear but not see
I could feel touch but not pain
My husband tried in vane
To wake me from my coma
Holding my hand and shoulder 
Talking and whispers in my ear
Get up and get out of here
Two weeks of unconscious 
My husband was continuous 
My slumber finally broke 
From my coma I awoke 
To hear devastating news
I couldn't believe the truth 
My husband died at the scene 
So was it all a dream? 
Or was it all real? 
An angel helped me heal

Premium Member Coma

Mattressed fall skies surround naked framed trees--the coming of old man winter

Premium Member On Hearing the News

Comatose and half dead
Yet hearing every word they said.
It couldn’t be worse for me or them. 
Expect my death, and pray-Amen.

Premium Member Coma

Coma
As I spoke with loneliness
it echoed its dreams
in faint whispers
a trace of me
air silently
breathe
life in
me.

2020 February 27

Premium Member Coma Queen

She was lava lamp pliable
Easily moved and positioned
Flippy floppy appendages 

Ridiculously compliant
Rare signs of life
Loud breathing

Danger of falling
Bed sore bound
Six year coma

C - Coma

Come closer, the canvas collapsed
This clairvoyant contains no confidence
Constant creative calamity clouds his clarity, continuously complicating his collective
From conscientious to cataleptic
Cooped up, closed off in his cranium
Centuries and centimeters continue and contort, constantly trying to keep count; counting the clicks of his center clock
A creator, now a captive; cut off from his countless colors- his core gets colder and colder
The conscious consensus has been cleaved, captured in his comatose cocoon
His chi calls out to consult
Without complaint or coercion, he is calm in his current conundrum
Conjuring a circumventing counter to this circumstantial change
Comfortable in his corporeal cathedral, catapulted through his cerebral cosmos
His life cannot cease

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