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As I spoke with loneliness it echoed its dreams in faint whispers a trace of me air silently breathe life in me.
2020 February 27
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Gauthier Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 9:30 PM
Great poem, William.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 9:35 PM
Thanks, Line -- Aloha!~@wk
Adams Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 6:34 PM
vivid imagery through your words William...powerful poem! hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 6:43 PM
Dear sweet Sandra, for I take warmth in your share -- Aloha!~@wk
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