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The doctor had a worried face. He asked me how I let it get this bad, and how I could be so stupid. I really can’t remember… I tried to tell him I was sorry, but I don’t think I could speak. He says I should sit. Sitting hurts my soul. He says I should lie down. Lying down is scary. Somehow I’m more dizzy lying down too. Just lie down and sleep… It feels like I’m slipping into a coma. So at first I fought my exhaustion. Until a coma started to not sound that bad. Maybe I would wake up a few months from now. And everything would be ok. But no, I was going to wake up tomorrow. And the nightmare will start.

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Date: 6/12/2023 12:22:00 PM
gee i hope this is just a fictional writr Angelica! hugs Jan xx
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