Caren Krutsinger Poet Free verse

Coma Queen

She was lava lamp pliable
Easily moved and positioned
Flippy floppy appendages 

Ridiculously compliant
Rare signs of life
Loud breathing

Danger of falling
Bed sore bound
Six year coma

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Quoth Theraven September 24, 2019 at 11:47 PM Caren, Sleeping Beauty? The images won't go away, but I like this write. I don't know why. I know I can count on you to stir the souls in the Soup. -Richard Caren Krutsinger September 25, 2019 at 6:16 AM I like to keep you on your toes, Sir.

Gershon Wolf September 24, 2019 at 9:08 PM It hurts just to read this one. :) gw Caren Krutsinger September 25, 2019 at 6:16 AM I know. This is why I wrote it.