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Coma Queen

She was lava lamp pliable Easily moved and positioned Flippy floppy appendages Ridiculously compliant Rare signs of life Loud breathing Danger of falling Bed sore bound Six year coma

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 9/24/2019 11:47:00 PM
Caren, Sleeping Beauty? The images won't go away, but I like this write. I don't know why. I know I can count on you to stir the souls in the Soup. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/25/2019 6:16:00 AM
I like to keep you on your toes, Sir.
Date: 9/24/2019 9:08:00 PM
It hurts just to read this one. :) gw
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/25/2019 6:16:00 AM
I know. This is why I wrote it.

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