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Favourable Coma

The person stuck on that memorable throne, They are not too immune, Twitching with suspicions, A knife behind their back, Soon they will be by your side, A partner ready to behead, Constant checks, Lonely Medicine, The pool of influence, Followed by infection, The recovery time is raw, Developing more than before, The morale of their greatest actions, Only a fraction of their innocent mind.

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Date: 7/7/2022 9:54:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.
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Toby Mutch
Date: 7/7/2022 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, I appreciate the welcome and I am happy that you took the time to read my poem.

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