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Premium Member 911

911
By Franklin Price
09/11/2026

Nine one one, two thousand one
A quarter century ago
Twin towers struck down to the ground
The Pentagon also

A third airliner on the way
To add more to the pain
Crashed In a Pennsylvania field
By the heroes on the plane

Innocent civilians 
Too soon were laid to rest
The USA attacked that day
By terrorists, a test

Funded by the very rich
Who hated who we were
Making world opinion worsen
Anywhere it could occur 

Now a quarter century later
We’re still responding to that day
We still have not recovered 
From the ones who made us pay

We do not work together
Our great country torn asunder
The terrorists worked well that day
To drive us to the present blunder

Premium Member A Torn Canvas is Two Paintings

siblings of passion ~ Love and Hate
argue like unruly children
in precipitous conflict
yet, never will the nest empty, because
    they...are OUR conscience 

~ one cannot destroy the other,  
   nor ignore the other, because
   they are of one blood
whose greatest toxin is
       indifference...

so...torn asunder, they must find
     a way to make two ~ one...

Forked Truth

A mangled man's
remains,
remain dismembered.
Scattered limbs 
laid amongst the
litter.
Littered
ligament lies
amidst tense 
muscle,
resting cuts
lay tender.

I really
try to not
remember.

This I
wish I
was lying about.

I can't
I magine
mans lying about.

Torn asunder, ripped
apart by chainsaw
teethed razor.
Rehearsed excuses
always sound best
on scratch paper. 

Throw it away or 
save it for later?
From behind ear 
whisper bubblegum's 
last flavor.
Hope all is better
before a blue
member come rapping 
upon thy chamber.

They won't just go away.
It's best to 
answer, then 
answer what they ask.
Then they'll leave you 
alone.
To go
about your day.
left in disarray,
disagree met dismay.

Where is the 
line that
compromised game 
last time?


566 Prayer for the 6th Commandment

566.

Prayer for the 6th Commandment



Oh Father God, You have commanded us not to commit adultery

This I must, this I perform willingly



For You have made us as temples of Your Spirit

We must avoid being like animals or 



Oh Jesus Christ, help me not to become an adulterer

I don't want my spirit to be torn asunder



To our Creator we must be led

From our Creator we must be fed



Oh Holy Spirit, let me not adulterate the body & soul

This is God's command, this is for the good of all.



Amen.



-10/29/2017

(Dumarao)

*Prayer for the 10 Commandments

Premium Member In Search of America

   
              In search of a common thread
                  to stitch up the rent fabric of
                     a nation torn asunder ... 

              A shining beacon to light the 
                   way across an ocean of worry
                      and doubt ... 

              Friendships grounded in genuine care and concern
                     in mutual reciprocity, each for the other ... 

              A return to serving God and one another

Premium Member Morning Without Mercy

The morning sighs
with hoarse, guttural caws.

Crows twirl and cartwheel backwards,
like charred scraps of newspaper
caught in wild feral, wind eddies
above a raging bush fire.

Goosestepping gulls
enforce their feeding-ground territories
with threats and violent gestures
their beaks snapping shut
like rust-corroded, iron gates.

Looping caterpillars
form a Congo line 
across the blistered bark of trees
while ants drag dismembered wings
along cracks in the pavement.

A magpie bludgeons
a snail against the stones
until the shell gives way
its pale body spilling outwards;
a molluscan sacrifice 
that satisfies the hunger pangs
of a black-and-white starving bird.

Worms writhe blindly, 
torn asunder
on the hot sunbaked soil
attacked by hordes of bull-ants
lake tiny matadors in torero corrida,
sparing with capes and lances
as they torment the helpless,
doomed, and dumb, succumbed prey.

The morning sun rises, 
guilty as charged!
without pity or cause,
without mercy or motive,
to silent, stark applause,
as nature pleads for survival.


Premium Member Winds of Yesterday

  
                  Winds of yesterday blow vainly
                     in futile pursuit of today

                  What once ignited our several passions  
                     this day swiftly drives us away

                   Torn asunder by a thunderclap
                      hearts riven never again overlap

Unbounded

As the shackles were torn asunder
And the chains were turned to shred
Wars waged and paths were plundered
It was better left unsaid

For what to do now
The cage gave direction
Without it there is doubt
A mind-numbing perplexion

Ridden with waste
The land is barren dry
A lack of haste
To stop the lies

Suddenly awake from the dreams
We are better off now it seems

243 Prayer When Bitter

243.

Prayer When Bitter



Oh Father God, I am bitter

My soul is hot like fever

Everything is getting critical

Let me overcome this upheaval



Oh Jesus Christ, I feel bitter

My heart is torn asunder

Deep pain I have inside

Let me set this wound aside



Oh Holy Spirit, I think bitter

My mind is becoming crazier

A lot of trouble it carries

Let me end those worries.



-01/15/2014

(Dumarao)

*My Prayer Poems Collection

Fruitcake

You may say I'm crazy
but as it takes one to know one
do you have what I've got
if I am are you too
and am I nuts to think I'm not
the shrink he's not telling
despite all my yelling
he only asks how it makes me feel
it's quite a strain on the brain
is he really and truly for real
then again if I'm insane
as the earth is bipolar
it's no wonder
there are so many weirdos and whackos
in a world torn asunder
at least I'm not alone
I think you'll find
it can't be overstated it's overrated
sanity
it's all in the mind

People Like

It is the way of the people,
people like you, people like me.
It is the way of the people,
to want whatever they see.
It is the way of the people,
people like you, people like me.
It is the way of the people,
to take whatever they please.
It is the way of the people,
people like you, people like me.
It is the way of the people,
to keep whatever they seize.
How many, many people
called this sad land their own?
How many, many people
lost this land they called home?
People like you, people like me,
pushed again, lost again, wandering free.
It is the way of the people,
taking from those who came before.
It is the way of the people,
to want and want and forever want more.
People like you, people like me,
taking from you, taking from me.
Taking dreams, scattering bones
of people like you, people like me,
without life, without homes.
Torn asunder, left to wonder
by people like you, people like me.
The world spins out another
people like you, people like me,
to drive and push away
people like you, people like me.
Thus it has been, thus it is,
for people like you, people like me.
Must it always be?

Water-Borne

Seen as a collection of spare parts
swimming in close formation
neither fish nor fowl
from a southern hemisphere nation
sewn together as if torn asunder
the amphibian antipodean
from way Down Under
is the odd-looking bottom-feeding
no muss nor fuss
otter-footed beaver-tailed
egg-laying duck-billed platypus
the males of which are venomous
an excellent swimmer
whenever it dives
it closes its ears nose and eyes
altho' a riparian carnivore
electroreception is how it survives

Premium Member That is not safe


                                             That`s not Safe

                             I dared to battle with the wild thunder
                       Where flashes of lightning could blind the eyes,
                             Where I escaped being torn asunder
                         And darkish clouds veiled the crest of the sky;

                          In this inner tempest that wrecked my heart
                           Every burst of wild wind echoed deep pains
                                Tearing the strata of my heart apart
                       While I struggled with stinging stress and strains.

                             If woeful storms turn the days into night,
                              Will summer sweet sunshine be far away
                          To spread its glow on earth and shed its light,
                                To guide man along the virtuous way.

                          Battling with thunder, I learnt that`s not safe 
                        With due lessons learnt, this can be vouchsafed.

Premium Member Seeing an Old Friend

Years gone by, you'd almost forgotten,
as you feel the days grow old and tired, 
you're bones ache, and you're feeling rotten,
when, once again, you feel life's fire. 

The two of you have been through a lot.
Long ago you were torn asunder,
but you loved each other, which can't be bought, 
'neath the bridge, lot's of water, under.
  
An occasion of pleasure or pain, 
something you wouldn't know in advance, 
a birth or funeral in the rain,
or possibly only happenstance, 

there is no pleasure, so great as when 
you see a dear old friend again,

Premium Member Song of Frost and Flame

The world was born of ice and flame
Of crystal drops that filled the empty plane
When Muspell's heat burned Niflheim

And life unraveled from the endless stream
And formed a voice whose name was Scream
Where shapes spilled out from his unseen dream

The waves then rise to cast new sounds
Soft yet gentle, the vibrant hums
Freed more life from their icy bounds

Defrost, the Aesir thus came to be
The first of which was so-called Búri
Whose son then wed and begat three

The three then warred against the Scream
For they saw no good inside his dreams
His pores sweat venom in boundless streams

That primal Scream thus fell down and shattered
His flesh and bone, all torn asunder
Which then were used to forge all matter

Henceforth came an age of craft divine
New worlds were built, 'til there were nine
Bound by Yggdrasil, their verdant spine

Yet discord hangs across the cosmic loom
Weaving prophecies that foretold gloom:
What bore the world shall be its doom

War and death had shaped Yggdrasil's roots
And destruction echoes within its shoots
Thus, war and death shall be its fruit

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