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4/28/2025 for Write Fourteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Seeing an Old Friend

Years gone by, you'd almost forgotten,
as you feel the days grow old and tired, 
you're bones ache, and you're feeling rotten,
when, once again, you feel life's fire. 

The two of you have been through a lot.
Long ago you were torn asunder,
but you loved each other, which can't be bought, 
'neath the bridge, lot's of water, under.
  
An occasion of pleasure or pain, 
something you wouldn't know in advance, 
a birth or funeral in the rain,
or possibly only happenstance, 

there is no pleasure, so great as when 
you see a dear old friend again,
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Fowler Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 9:11 AM
Hello Dave my friend. Love the rhyming, love the thought, love the win. Congratulations! elle :)
Crandall Avatar
May 6, 2025 at 4:07 PM
Hi elle - thanks!
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 9:16 AM
Hi, Daniel :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Crandall Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Thanks, you too, Anne-Lise!
Greenhough Avatar
May 1, 2025 at 11:20 AM
I enjoy this poem. It has a good ending.
Crandall Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 10:38 AM
Thanks Hilda - yep, a happy ending!
Barberis Avatar
April 29, 2025 at 11:34 AM
A very tender poem. Well done, you.
Crandall Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 10:39 AM
Aw, thanks Beau!
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