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4/28/2025 for Write Fourteen Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

Years gone by, you'd almost forgotten, as you feel the days grow old and tired, you're bones ache, and you're feeling rotten, when, once again, you feel life's fire. The two of you have been through a lot. Long ago you were torn asunder, but you loved each other, which can't be bought, 'neath the bridge, lot's of water, under. An occasion of pleasure or pain, something you wouldn't know in advance, a birth or funeral in the rain, or possibly only happenstance, there is no pleasure, so great as when you see a dear old friend again,

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Date: 5/6/2025 9:11:00 AM
Hello Dave my friend. Love the rhyming, love the thought, love the win. Congratulations! elle :)
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David Crandall
Date: 5/6/2025 4:07:00 PM
Hi elle - thanks!
Date: 5/3/2025 9:16:00 AM
Hi, Daniel :) - Congratulations on your fourteen beautiful lines in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 10:38:00 AM
Thanks, you too, Anne-Lise!
Date: 5/1/2025 11:20:00 AM
I enjoy this poem. It has a good ending.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 10:38:00 AM
Thanks Hilda - yep, a happy ending!
Date: 4/29/2025 11:34:00 AM
A very tender poem. Well done, you.
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David Crandall
Date: 5/3/2025 10:39:00 AM
Aw, thanks Beau!

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