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People Watching

There.

third row, second seat
hair over eyes, red-rimmed
tired maybe?
shirt buttoned wrong
laces untied
broken hearted

last row, right at the back
a young couple
giggling
not watching
love
how long will it last

the movie starts
theatre darkens
eyes front
focused on the screen
engrossed, distracted
popcorn, drinks, spilt

front row
now on the floor
children
necks tilted up
vibrating in excitement
can't look away

middle aisle
near the exit
new parents
on the edge of their seat
waiting for the call
desperate for a night off

movie ends
lights rise
people stand, stretch
slowly trickle out
leaving behind spilt drinks, popcorn
the floor a mosaic of people

netflix
stan
prime
hulu
peacock
disney

empty now
darkness lingers
screen unused
velvet seats grow dusty
stale popcorn permeates
I am empty now

No one there.

Premium Member Frozen Hands

A girl watchmaker stands among clocks rimmed with frost,
     their pale faces caught in winter's thin hush.
She watches silence drip from their frozen hands,
     each drop a faint crack in the brittle air.
Shadows settle like cold breath around her craft,
     while time thins itself beneath her steady gaze.

Premium Member A Hundred Miles Long Version

Long distant cry, how I pine for your touch,
a bridge of one hundred miles,
gaunt gulf beyond my grasp

golden haze of blithe recall, sunlit strolls,
heartfelt pledge, under green copse,
then transfer, post abroad

your dulcet voice on phone has me weeping,
though honeysuckle laughter,
creeps in, sinks a deep root

close union fostered, we dwell, dream, at dawn,
where that gem rimmed stroke of luck,
heralds my homebound trek

post trauma absence, dwindles in a kiss,
a gleaming eye rapprochement, 
velvet voice hue’d dribble

winsome weekend yet return journey lurks,
seconds fly, olympic spurts,
solemn clock a spoilsport

resume garnet glisten threads of fond blab,
 sonic swathe of peachy phrase,
 from a glow world era

ramble through lush haunt on a spur or spark,
where once love’s first blush blossomed,
in time pastille misty.  

a gurgling swirl pool, high tide torrent now,
engulf twin flame’s scarce resource,
random swing by mood boost

catch up at lightning pace, that traffic jam,
of wistful yesterday’s dash,
oops…yikes…booked cab in yard!!


Premium Member Papers and Pecans

He sits at his stump-desk  
as though the forest appointed him  
keeper of its minor truths~  
wire-rimmed glasses catching the low light,  
plaid bowtie knotted with intention.

The wooden laptop waits,  
open to whatever thought  
the morning has not yet named.  
Coffee steams beside the inkwell,  
papers scattered like fallen leaves  
he has already begun to translate.

Even the landline, absurd in its presence,  
seems to understand  
that calls here are rare  
but always important.

The uncracked pecans rest beside his papers,
not symbolic, simply present~
a reminder that some work
starts with the smallest,
most ordinary labor of the hands.

He studies the papers strewn around him,
each marked with the faint trace
of earlier attempts at order.
For a moment he simply reads,
letting the work tell him
where to begin.

Premium Member No Gold in That Water


                Not a snowflake’s chance in mid-August
                     of Goldwater ever changing his stripes

                Nope. Ever since he could palm a frankfurter weenie
                     he's been somewhere to the right of Mussolini

                 A proud match for William Buckley, that Barry
                      horn-rimmed glasses, living free on the Arizona prairie

                 Uh, what? He’s gone? OK. Who can I substitute? Reagan? Gone too?
                       How ‘bout Trump? I don’t think so. Too fickle, you see

Premium Member Veils Of Wistfulness

Vain tears
           they seep in 
             silent streams
                lurk darkly 
                  behind 
              a  repressed 
               shadowy wail
                  taunt or tease 
                fond veils
                 torn and tattered
            seldom worn
               visibly 
                 of dull
           wistfulness
              oe’r silver 
             passage 
              or faux gold
                 bridge 
              whose 
       wobbly  link
    to halcyon
      august days 
         putative ring
     mere hollow 
       bell toll   
 purported peal
    a shallow chime
  vanishing vapour
    of hazy clang
     nocturnal raptures
    of mythic  maze 
      bagatelle vacuous
         chimera amplified 
      by skewed perspective 
        tangents rimmed 
   by fantasy


Premium Member Enthralled By Those Eyes

Her blue swirl sea green orbs woo,
me, shipwrecked swimming  waif with,
that wild tide rush froth-rimmed glance,
I capsize transfixed

Premium Member Day Peep Minstrel

Mellow mantras, 
   daub my ear,
     with rapt sultry 
       opal   peals, 
    whilst entwining,
      seamless sheath,
        of aural vista,
          whose magic wand,
             sedates yet enthusiast,
              of this morning  nomad, 
            whose quixotic quill,
        aches for ardent dawn,
    to tranquilize meandering, 
      muse off target,
     focus on,
   aurora spectrum, 
    day-peep pageant, 
  of  pristine pink,
      demure aligned,
        sun  horizon  hover,
          gliding gold wisps,    
             fleeting blue ray,
           chimera or mood swing,
         dalliance of dust grain, 
             as I allude to,
        gleaming dewdrops,
     In lofty lyric,
        prompt from,
   green leaf rustle,
      or grey twig tweak,
  silver  stream murmur, 
    moist  babble of,
      hushed hints,
      rush and ripple,
        froth rimmed swirl,
  vapour vortices visceral,
   whet my creative juice,
     from lucent pools,
           can I imagine,
     wondrous tactile trails

Premium Member SPRING MIRROR

black-rimmed mirror waits,
holding the calm of spring rain~
old memories rise.

Soft droplets drift down the glass,
touching what the past once held.

Poem created from Poetry Wheel Challenge
Theme: Memory
Emotion: Calm
Color: Black
Season: Spring
Form: Tanka
Object: Mirror
Verb: Rise

Premium Member Breathless

Heaven is not the  word to awaken,
with lemon balm sprig bristle in each lung,
a staunch loam-ridden citrus bouquet,
in an urban copse of dulcet twittering tone,
avian wrens in sweet floral flute glaze, 
whose madrigal a charmed chestnut chime,
vast tree canopy quiver note suspense,
clam shell ear tilt of mine to absorb,
scattered mint fragrant leaf strewn carpet,
pale grey glisten brittle branch snap I twig,
rain soak mud clump squelch quaint echo,
still morning usher draped in lambent haze,
teaser trickle stream tucked away a prickle,
deep purple rose bush as dawn shelter,
grass blade tuft flicker on rimmed bypath,
breathless so I am amidst lavish terrain,
spellbound, captivated, eye transfixed,
by clement backcloth to a city in slumber, 
indigo blue signpost embossed bold cue,
for empyrean trope as shrewd street élan,
mural chalk mark swirl from deft artist,
gourmet menu flair neath parasol, 
overwhelmed, stunned, air passage empty,
yet my first blush stroll sun vital tonic

Premium Member Shroud Of Dusk

Whilst the sun slowly sinks 
Beneath the snow-capped mountains 
Dark-rimmed clouds drift high above 
Red-orange skies shroud the sky 
V-shaped geese honking afar 
Darkness creeps on mirrored lakes 
Gold eyes wink as dusk sets in

Premium Member Desperate Housewives

Alejandro kicked the door open.
His step-daughter was huddled on her bed,
weeping and trembling with fear.
There was no pity in him,
his heart cold as an iceberg,
his whole being reeking of alcohol.
 
Gabrielle dreaded her ordeal
but could not utter one sound.
"One shout from you and I'll kill you."
She knew he meant it as she stared
into his red rimmed hard eyes.
 
Downstairs his wife sat placidly
in front of the television, 
watching the latest episode
of Desperate Housewives.

Premium Member HAWK EYES

What a fearful aspect in your eyes:
liquid, dark, fierce and deep;
two orbs rimmed with copper and gold,
and I wonder what awesome council you keep.
What is behind that thousand mile stare?
You look like a poet composing a line
or an orator pausing to grandly declaim 
something profound for the ill of our time;
or a brave soldier standing guard,
outstaring the sun on Hadrian's wall;
or a handsome lover seeking to hold
a smitten maiden in a smouldering thrall.


   Your glaring face fills my mind with wonder.
What are you thinking, hawk?
                                                   Hunger.

Premium Member Intriguing Summit Watch

Shadow mountain peak, 
one somehow can’t quite fathom,
it’s that upward sweep

at sunrise, sunset,
quaint jagged features protrude,
they induce dark mirth 

methinks a fable,
inscrutable, tightly lodged,
in each skyward step 

novel within grasp,
phrases etched in mystic stone,
rimmed by moss whirl stream 

lofty, lambent odes,
I sculpt in mound of twilight,
enshrouded wry  blur 

vast hunch ascendant,
edgy climber gumption yet,
settles for lax gaze

syblline boundless  bard,
that red  cloud piercing tower,
a remote verse whim

To Wait

For years and four days, 
I await a knock, a stark reply, 
The unknown a wretched price to pay, 
And it burns me alive. 
They say fire is but cleansing, if so my soul is burnished bright, 
Yet it does not warm the morning, nor brighten black night. 
But mourning the past, what has been and could be, brings a heart only sorrow, and threatens ill deed.
So I'll turn red rimmed eyes, from smoke and weary tears, to the God who is wise, to whom prayers never fall on deaf ears.  
For the years I have waited, a lifetime of trial, 
He never wavered, my heart never reviled.
For His goodness and mercy, are neither bound nor abated,
Through the waiting and fire, 
I see it is in Him, I've truly waited.

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