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Contest ; Breathless.                     
Sponsor ; Constance La France 

Breathless

Heaven is not the  word to awaken,
with lemon balm sprig bristle in each lung,
a staunch loam-ridden citrus bouquet,
in an urban copse of dulcet twittering tone,
avian wrens in sweet floral flute glaze, 
whose madrigal a charmed chestnut chime,
vast tree canopy quiver note suspense,
clam shell ear tilt of mine to absorb,
scattered mint fragrant leaf strewn carpet,
pale grey glisten brittle branch snap I twig,
rain soak mud clump squelch quaint echo,
still morning usher draped in lambent haze,
teaser trickle stream tucked away a prickle,
deep purple rose bush as dawn shelter,
grass blade tuft flicker on rimmed bypath,
breathless so I am amidst lavish terrain,
spellbound, captivated, eye transfixed,
by clement backcloth to a city in slumber, 
indigo blue signpost embossed bold cue,
for empyrean trope as shrewd street élan,
mural chalk mark swirl from deft artist,
gourmet menu flair neath parasol, 
overwhelmed, stunned, air passage empty,
yet my first blush stroll sun vital tonic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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June 10, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest with your beautifully crafted poem, Howard
La France Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:08 PM
Howard, congratulations on your win in my Breathless contest with your wonderfully penned poem~
Kerr Avatar
June 9, 2026 at 3:45 PM
Thank you, Constance, for evaluating this work and for placing it. It is very much appreciated. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 5:11 AM
Bringing a copse in an area to life through personification is creative. This one reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 6:14 AM
I always learn so much from your insightful comments,Sara. You are so constructive in your approach. I wish you well, Howard
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 11:44 PM
So many breathtaking images, Howard. Nicely done
Kerr Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 2:52 AM
Much valued and appreciated, Andrea. Many thanks for including me in your schedule.
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