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Contest Title ;  LET'S DO IT                                          

Sponsor's Name ; Nette Onclaud                                  
 

Date Posted  ; 7th August 2026.                                   
 

Howmanysyllables  Confirmed

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Enthralled By Those Eyes

Her blue swirl sea green orbs woo,
me, shipwrecked swimming  waif with,
that wild tide rush froth-rimmed glance,
I capsize transfixed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 15, 2026 at 6:22 PM
Congrats, Howard!
Kendrick Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:42 AM
Now I am wondering if it might be a mermaid that has transfixed you. I really like this one. Way to go. If for a contest, it reads like a good winner to me. 👍✍️ Sara K.
Kerr Avatar
August 8, 2026 at 4:53 AM
In one sense this post of mine is fantasy. Sara. A mermaid is a possibility. On this occasion a more unconventional approach is required. That notwithstanding I’m so pleased you liked it. Howard
Dietrich Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 9:39 PM
Wow. What great imagery here. I really like this 🥹
Kerr Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 10:39 PM
I appreciate that comment of yours, Andrea. Thanks for your visit. Howard
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