Fuddled Poems | Examples


Premium MemberThe lost Gem


The lost Gem

With a sunken heart	
l uttered a wail
one that sings 
of a direful loss
ravaging the heart 
with rhythms of soulless beats  

far sighting a scene  
fuddled by a murky sight 
l began to stutter 
as l saw sight a scene 
which were aforetime a gem
now rubbished with germs

the bard'z fuddled garble

.

                 bizarre I say
              twixt mine mane
                  mine digits
                    twisting

           she peeks mine look
                   hern eyne
                      plead
                         i
                       me

                  suspended
                mine imagine

                 az the moon
                   mine see
                  the rotund
               hiz derogatory 
                       fist
               mine purgatory
                      think

                       pop


Premium MemberBattle Of The Hemispheres

and a switch flicks
who are you he asks
it should be me 
asking who are you
until the switch 
flicks back to . . .

fuddled hours 
gone are the simplest things
a crayon in a box of pens
then that switch 
and it’s who are you
I want to go home

but in truth 
it’s who are you
as now a foreign clarity of sorts
no more mumbling incoherence
no shuffling walk
now it’s clear, sure

and behold 
a different person emerges
occupying my father
secretly all this time
now stepping out
through the non-dominance

and slowly
becoming the dominant part
a battle of the hemispheres
   dementia – an uprising 
   of hidden people
   from somewhere ago

Premium MemberSit In the Sun

If it is your dream to become a politician
It does not make you a saint or a magician
You will make mistakes, like everybody else
You will try your best and seldom think of yourself.

Love your country and your fellow man
Make the world a better place
Was your dream and plan
There was never a thought
About illness and age

Life moves on,
As our book turns over another page
Our body tires quickly, and our bones start to ache
Our eyes grow dim
It gets hard to stay awake.

Our minds get muddled,
And our gait unsteady
Our speech fuddled
But we are never ready

To admit we are old,
And we need to be told
We have had our day,
And it is wrong to stay

When we are old and ill
And can no longer fill
Our obligations
To the nation

It seems cruel and sad,
But life is not all bad
Old age comes to all who survive
And are fortunate to be alive

But if senility takes a hold,
You need someone to be bold
And suggest now is the time to go
Before your ratings become too low

And as your health is getting worse
You will become too sick to realise this curse
Can undo all the good you have done
So retire and sit in the sun.
Form: Rhyme

Premium MemberWinter Morn

fuzzy fuddled fogs
bluntly blindfold vast vistas ~
slain sleepy silence


04 December 2021
Form: Haiku


Premium MemberFuddled Zombie Wakes Up With Coffee

The smell of dark coffee brews in early morn.
Such a treat to wake up to, when I’m groggy and worn 
I’m not fond of fancy frothy coffee shop brew
None of them will really do 
Unless you pour a spot of Irish Cream to fire up a few.

When my girlfriend Susie would come over to stew, 
I always put on a fresh pot of dark roasted coffee to brew 
I have always been a softy when giving her a caring shoulder 
We enjoyed the bliss of coffee and Baileys Irish Cream liqueur
to make us bolder. 

Friendship with laughter is a treasure,  
with a sip of spiked coffee will always do with pleasure.

When I was young, Mommy would sometimes wake up 
looking like a fuddled zombie, 
but 
as soon as she’d have her first cup of sugary with cream coffee, 
she’d be our mommy again cooking us something good for our tummies.

12/3/3021

redo 12/9/2016


''Z'' Contest, New or Old - Poetry Contest 5.  zombie   
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

original title: WAKE UP WITH COFFEE OR TEA

To Live Without You

The rest of my life starts now...
A checkerboard battle of custody, 
evidence of fatherly love fell short
My fuddled walk now through leafless trees, 
weeps, traversing corners of an empty nest  
erasing  black patches of white sunlight
I am learning to live without you, my dear.

In my flowerless spring,
I can hear footsteps of your childish laughter 
In my sterile morning window panes, 
I can see your cherubic sunny face  
In my dusty colourless albums ,
I can  touch your tantrums reborn  
In  your sizzling scent  of innocence,
I can  drench my sonorous silence.

Haunting words of ache from my quiet world 
will perhaps never reach you 
In a distant country , I see you growing up
As I grow up... learning to live without you.


30th May 2020

Sponsor	JCB Burl
Contest Name	A World Without You ??

Premium MemberCouple Fuddled

COUPLE FUDDLED

A once wedded couple,
Looking forward to a quiet cuddle,
Drank too much wine,
Got dizzy did not even dine,
As their minds became a complete fuddle!
Form: Limerick

The Mermaid Drowned

A fuddled mind surfs through tides.
Harboured, she sits by the sea doing nothing.
Her toes make electric touch with the  water
Restless currents ... spark the sand.

She could see the ocean break into two parts.
Did the Ocean have a heart?
She had salt in her tears..
She had pepper in her eyes..
The briny breeze..why  was it so bitter?...
She knew... she was a Cheater.

He had a heart of ocean.
A treasure of glowing pearls within.
She had pushed him off the coast of Trust.
He was shipwrecked by her deceit.

The tail of the Mermaid was hidden.
He could see only half her face.
Tranquil in innocence and ignorance..
He was blind to the treacherous disgrace.

Etched by the smouldering Tsunami
An island imprisoned her stranded.
The Mermaid drowned and drowned.. 
in the sea of encumbrance...
she thought...
Is there a second chance?

3rd November 2018

Tell me a story 2 poetry contest
Sponsor Brenda Chiri
PLACED SIXTH IN CONTEST

Premium MemberWake Up With Coffee Or Tea

The smell of dark coffee brews in early morn
Such a treat to wake up to, when I’m groggy and worn
I’m not fond of fancy frothy coffee shop brews 
None of them will really do
 Unless you pour a spot of Irish cream to fire ups the horn 

When my girlfriend Susie would come over to stew
I always put on a fresh pot of dark roasted coffee to brew
I have always been a softy when giving her a caring shoulder  
We enjoyed the bliss of coffee and Baileys Irish Cream liqueur 
to make us bolder.
  Friendship with laughter is a treasure with a sip of coffee will always do

When I was young,
Mommy would sometimes wake up looking like a fuddled zombie, 

But

 As soon as she’d have her first cup of sugary with cream coffee 
She’d be our mommy again cooking us something good for our tummies.

12/9/2016

Thy Death, Poetry

Machiavelli's false theory reigns supreme,
I have no use for your marbles, 
So economize your garbles!
What use has a mannequin of a dream?

The dull green top, it spins in fuddled haste, 
True beauty's torture in its stagnant jig, 
Gulp! Don't savour the devil in the taste,
The plot's been bought and now it's time to dig.

Fare thee well and may ye always be merry
on thine voyage to your darlings, Poetry.
Form: Rhyme

Whisky In Oval Glass

Oval glass
Like your waistline 
Touches my fingers

Whisky in it 
Pretty hard
Soften with
Swing ice cubes
Glitters with cold 

Sipping by lips
Like your ****
Taste in love
Fuddled feelings
Slowly lie down

Your glance
Being an image in it
Concavely looks at
While filling up
With another ice cube

Desire reminds
Like talking your eyes
In a short time
Empty glass
Looks at me

In a moment
I stand up
And go for a cigarette. 



Udaya R. Tennakoon

I the Graduate

Sit me here without merriment have I
Me teacher to I say
Ascertain this thing called Pi
Be fuddled be fluxed be fizzled
Me brain light just dies.

Stand me here what lavish leading tones sings I
Me teacher to I say
Sing the words-vocalize
Loudly Laudably Laughingly
Me soul un lamentably does rise.

Saturated me-self in what knowledge have I
Me teacher to I say
Graduate this day and be baptized
Apprized with fisheyes
Me soul doth now say banzai

Man's Complacency

Man’s greatest  strength is his mind
It empowers him though it may be twisted
and pined
Better still it has become his enemy too
For what he knows and views
  
It has weaken him by earthy temptations
So fuddled with many frustrations
 It is he that is the highest of his species 
Yet he shows little to no superiority 
In his perplexed inferiority 

Draining out from his riddled soul 
Reduplicated behaviors with little control 
With fists clinched in a primal stance 
Where power has given him an ugly glance
 
Lay on the lands on bloody soil 
Where man and women cry and toil 
A higher power has brought us here 
To grow and perspire and love and share
 
Can we turn our heads away? 
With the pain and sadness driven to stay 
Humanity must evolve some wisdom and peace 
Let the fighting and the earthy war’s cease.
Form: Lyric

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