To Live Without You

The rest of my life starts now...
A checkerboard battle of custody, 
evidence of fatherly love fell short
My fuddled walk now through leafless trees, 
weeps, traversing corners of an empty nest  
erasing  black patches of white sunlight
I am learning to live without you, my dear.

In my flowerless spring,
I can hear footsteps of your childish laughter 
In my sterile morning window panes, 
I can see your cherubic sunny face  
In my dusty colourless albums ,
I can  touch your tantrums reborn  
In  your sizzling scent  of innocence,
I can  drench my sonorous silence.

Haunting words of ache from my quiet world 
will perhaps never reach you 
In a distant country , I see you growing up
As I grow up... learning to live without you.


30th May 2020

Sponsor	JCB Burl
Contest Name	A World Without You ??

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/8/2020 9:46:00 PM
Most profound expressions of your deep thoughts. A great, great piece!
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Date: 6/1/2020 4:11:00 PM
'leafless trees, flowerless springs, colourless albums'...brilliant use of imagery for an emotional write. Wish it was placed higher in the contest. Congratulations on your win Debjani :)
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Date: 6/3/2020 8:44:00 AM
Thanks Aditi ..elated you liked
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