Couple Fuddled

COUPLE FUDDLED

A once wedded couple,
Looking forward to a quiet cuddle,
Drank too much wine,
Got dizzy did not even dine,
As their minds became a complete fuddle!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/4/2023 4:26:00 AM
That would not be a very good honeymoon. Thanks for sharing this one. Sara
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Date: 12/8/2018 1:44:00 AM
The magic in a glass of wine. Is lost when lovers intertwine. The gift of love is all you need. When cupid's arrow plants it's seed.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/9/2018 12:37:00 AM
You are so right Robert. Perhaps we should take into account that they were young and inexperienced. It was harsh lesson to learn on their wedding day, but if that's what it had to be, better sooner than later! Thank-you for your beautiful rhymed comment Robert. Best wishes. jennifer
Date: 11/20/2018 1:27:00 AM
LOL, loved it....I gather they had an early night. LOL! Kim (another one for my favourite list)
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/22/2018 6:48:00 AM
Hi Kim, Maybe an early morning be cause they were befuddled after their wine so much so that they did not even dine! xoxo, Jenifer.
Date: 11/19/2018 4:29:00 AM
Oh no...A least they love to drink...something in common...All the best to you...
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/19/2018 9:30:00 AM
Hi Arturo, Hopefully as a married couple they will develop more interests in common. At least we hope so! Best wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 11/18/2018 8:07:00 PM
well, dang, i thought they would end up in bed or something! Good one, and I wanted to thank you for commenting at my mom poem Sorry your mom underwent such a change. I have another friend whose mother became very different after age 60. After that age, I recently had cancer and this changed the way I eat So in that way I am different now. i am a health food fanatic. Sure hope I can work on being more optimistic than I am . We all have things to work on. Just glad my mom did not change on us!!
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/19/2018 9:22:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Sorry to hear you're not well, but you have a very positive attitude, and God listens to your prayers. A good diet is essential, glad you are eating healthy. I know in my heart that you will get better! Thank-you for your comment. My mum and I made things right about 3 months before she died. God bless, Jennifer
Date: 11/18/2018 7:45:00 AM
Way to go, Jennifer. It's cute. Over indulgence is a funny thing to watch. Have you seen people who cross a certain threshold can't stop? It's a bit sad in that case. It usually ends with Chucky.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2018 11:26:00 AM
You're so right Duke - it is sad to watch someone who has had too much to drink to be completely not in control of his or movements and speech. It is however all a matter of choice however, as is everything in life, and the addiction can be overcome. Hopefully this couple are young enough to recognise their mistake! Best regards, Jennifer.
Date: 11/17/2018 4:29:00 PM
He he ... that's what excessive drink does to you!! Hope it wasn't part of their honeymoon! Regards // paul
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 11:11:00 PM
I think it was Paul. Perhaps they will have a little more respect for this happy juice from now on! Thanks for the comment Paul, warm regards, Jennifer
Date: 11/17/2018 3:26:00 PM
I agree with this 100%. A little dab will do you! I enjoyed this fun limerick Jennifer. xxoo : )
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 11:18:00 PM
Hi Connie, so right you are! Some people don't know where to draw the line - this couple spoilt one of the best days of their lives. Thank goodness its only a poem but we all know, it happens and not only at weddings! Thank you for your comment- all the best. xoxo, Jennifer
Date: 11/17/2018 1:55:00 PM
Aye, it is the candle-lit dinners that fool the eyes! Aloha! Rico
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2018 12:22:00 AM
Thanks Rico, nice to hear from you! I love candle-lit dinners, but then again, one must know enough is enough! Best Wishes, Yasou - Jennifer.
Date: 11/17/2018 11:18:00 AM
A fun limerick, Jennifer.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/18/2018 12:43:00 AM
Hi Line, Thank you for your comment. I guess they had to learn the hard way, sad that it was their wedding day! Best wishes, Jennifer.
Date: 11/17/2018 9:53:00 AM
my advice top keep off the wine lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 10:33:00 AM
Thanks Jan, glad you stopped by. A lesson for all newly weds! xoxo, Jennifer
Date: 11/17/2018 7:03:00 AM
Jennifer, I do like limericks, but this one has a special place in my heart as I see this so much around this time of year. When people make mistakes and lips get too loose due to the be-fuddling.
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Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2018 9:53:00 AM
You bought back memories as I remember that rhyme from my childhood Jennifer lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/17/2018 7:27:00 AM
Hi Caren, someone years ago a friend of mine, wrote me a rhyme - 2 Y's U R, 2 Y's U B, I C U R 2 Y's for me! I thought it was clever, thought I'd share it with you as you always comment so wisely! xoxo, Jennifer
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