Draft Poems | Examples

Last Light

The candle trembles in the draft
shadows stretching like whispered secrets.
A single heartbeat fractures the dark
and stars lean closer to listen.
Even the silence carries it still: 
we once had our light.

Premium Member rough draft of the I don't care

When I was a boy,
I was snarky and coy,
I learnt the lessons,
when the bullies
beat the heck  out of me
and too right as this
was my personality
and this little prick
was being such a dick.

Living so vividly
being taught a lesson,
I still smoked in the boy's
of the toilets
and got caught.
The teacher waited,
until I inhaled the last
as I knew it made no difference.
I was going to cop a suspension
again.....anyway.

My mother's claws were a hawk's
when she got home,
and I tried so gently,
to break down the truth
but its no incidence
She delivered deliverance....

I had already locked the back door,
but she still scratched the 
hell out of my face,
like an involuntary impatient,
I hate the fact,
as she was healthy
I was still the death
of her.......
before her illnesses.

I don't know of why my anarchy
I never obey rules of monastery
Its just that I always lived,
and I am now drowning
as I'm trying to breathe,

I remember the starfishes
upon collection of beaches,
My Auntie's a pianist
but my memorial
Especially my Uncle,
pulled coins from my ears.
2 dollar coins
worth 10 dollars
today.

Two Caught in the Draft of a Door Ajar

We're mannequins peering from a storage
bin. We slouch across from
the "No-Food" paper sign.
Its message sags to a pulp taped to the shoulders
of a glass door. Shoppers,
incoming, their shared orange

squirts juice. Our mannequin-custodial
grins bar us from the lips' sweet 'oh'.

Crowdsourcing emboldens shame, our French kisses hung
on tangy wind chimes breezes tongue.


14-5-2025 Days Spent On A Draft

From the outside it might look like my life has improved, 
But in spite of how I like to be viewed, 
I’ve never had to bite my tongue as often as I have in these last few months.
Just gotta chew on my words like food.
On the Southside of the city view, 
The lights on the water shifted reflecting off the choppy grooves, 
The night stopped by and gave me an eye.
Like my mother, 
Tonight disapproved. 
Tomorrow too, 
Or at least I’ll assume. 
For all the loud fights with myself,
I still feel awfully removed, 
Almost asleep behind the lights because living lively is living like a ruse. 

Take me as a bite, 
Chew on my words for a while, 
Spit out the waste as your cheeks grow full. 
Taste the bile, 
Brew on the thoughts for a while, 
Hints of a sorry guile pace meekly on your tongue.
The push, 
And the pull.

Fighting Sharks-Draft 2

verse 1

Mr Nice Man
nice disguise at the front
just like your own paintings
blur the edges
just like Salvador.

verse 2

Promising prizes
not like the wisest
dont act like you care
Predator.

Chorus

your floating in the wrong seas
your fighting me for what for
your hunting for the wrong things
all like Salvador.

Chorus 2

Your fighting in the wrong seas
hunting for the wrong things
up side down, wrong way round
just like Salvador.

Bridge verse

Your drowning in the blue seas
and the pictures getting clearer
upside down and counting
whats the hunting for.

lyric builder in progress- Draft 2

Premium Member FIRST DRAFT, DAVID GATES SONG

I would give everything I own
Give up my hat, toupee, and comb
I would give everything I own
Just to scratch your back again.


JUST A DRAFT

Sometimes there is no meaning
Not what we feel, but this feeling
It's how I feel, how you feel
Knowing it's temporary, one season
Be fleeting, don't be fast
Because the faster the steps
... .... .....

Have you ever heard of an old saying?
" Haste is the enemy of perfection "
But you really achieved
This desired perfection
What's perfect for you?
A pencil to paper, creating, shaping
The shapes, the words, the curves
A simple example
A simple text
A simple sketch
Just a draft
But it's not enough, it's not enough
To be or not to be enough...
Insufficient, unbearable, unfortunately…

What is this bitter feeling?
That I painfully feel
That leaves me constantly
With hate for this world
I'm just a draft
Burn me, erase me, tear me
Contrary to my inner silence
That says: if you hate, everyone hates you
That says: kill yourself, stay away, isolate yourself
We are not perfect... we are just a draft.

Premium Member A Notional First Draft

I wandered and pondered my bleak isolation
As I slowly perused this wide open space
That one cloud above me seemed, like me, quite lonely
Its passage was slow as it matched my own pace
And then I saw poppies so tall, red and bold
I wished they were daffies in yellow and gold

The lake in its vastness reflected the skies
And sprinkles of sunlight beyond that lone cloud
Peppered the ripples with myriad eyes
And led me to feel like I walked with a crowd
While unopened poppies stand tall with bowed heads
They’ll stand even taller displaying their reds

Could there be any more precious a day
I all at once yearned to be no other place
With sunlight and ripples and poppies that sway
I found that a smile had enlivened my face
For such a sight might make an old poet gay
(Which one should interpret the old fashioned way)

For oftentimes upon my old sofa lain
I reminisce of all those poppies so red
Their petals occur to me now and again
But gold hues hold sway in my head
Though poppies, that day, cleared my mind of its ills
I still wish that they had all been daffodils

First Draft

First Draft

Classroom creativity
Ebb and flow
Teaching the things
I know I know
Investigating others
For a much better skill
To teach to spark hunger
And never to kill
The desire to grow, create and fulfill
Dreams and goals
In the language of life
With the music of poetry
And literary device.

      ~  Judy Bausch

Premium Member Heloise - First Draft

Like moon on nights of skies unstarred
she lived without her Abelard.
A parched, still plain was Heloise -
like moon on nights of skies unstarred.
In death she would not lose regard
for him who’d been her rain and breeze.
Like moon on nights of skies unstarred,
she lived without her Abelard.

first Draft

I love K food
I love the taste
I love the fragrance
I love the smells
I love the texture
I love the feel
I love how it looks

Korean food is somewhat like
Chinese, Japanese, Vietnamese, and Thai
With some American influences as well
But it is also unique
Distinctive and delicious

The fragrance of Korean food
Is what draws me in
The aroma of garlic, ginger, sesame oil
Soy sauce, red pepper paste, vinegar, sugar
And other spices and herbs
That creates a symphony of scents
That stimulates My appetite
And make My mouth water

Premium Member Sun-kissed Silhouettes - First Draft

Upon her last sighs, she narrates cosmic 
sagas flowing within poetic veins.
She still remembers 
those idyllic evenings, 
engrossed in raining confessions, 
influenced by her shipwrecked heart, 
expressing scarlet 
sentiments that sail in silence,
across unruffled ink-stained waves,
amidst the endless oceans between 
their untouched silhouettes.

Her every desire to reunite and 
cast away midnight blues,
float within perfumed love notes 
written by the silky seashore,
placed in crystalline bottles 
of timeless lyrics,
that shall be carried through 
estuaries that lead her 
to his sacred island 
with everlasting roses~
where pearlized shells reflect 
saline left as tropical memories 
of tomorrow with him by 
her sun-kissed innocence.

Premium Member Museum Of Masked Faces - First Draft


On synthetic derelict stage of deception domain,
I gyrate the split mind, ensnared by bipolarity chain.
Under illusive limelight of ostentatious time, 
I’m entangled in machinated invasive paradox prime.
In make-belief life’s drama I act with no compunction, 
I face fabricated faces flocking redundant in conjunction. 
Identity lost in conglomerate of counterfeit facades,
I don’t perform by heart's prudent prompt if it pervades.
In masquerading faces reflected in warped mirror, 
I see concealed the contorted contours of rancid rancor. 
With their phony pretense a conciliation role I tactfully play,
my misshapen face of spite, the actor in me doesn't portray. 
Finding a fake place to subsist in pretend archival spaces, 
I’m a configured antique in the museum of masked faces.

Last First Draft

Massing waves drummed offshore
Above them a partnered wind blew
Together they prepared to war
Against what I once knew

The dark and cold green vastness 
Carried forward my waterloo 
Upon the rocks it did press
Against what I once knew

Then a gray shadowed the land 
Coloring my thought of you 
And as the waves broke across the sand
They removed all I once knew

Premium Member Death or Triumph First Draft

Her body was that of a wizened crone,
her enfeebled mind was that of a child.
Playfully, she skipped and jumped rope, and shone,
but only in her confused dreams of wild.
Her drear some days softened by her tone,
she mumbled of lost love, and her eyes smiled.

Time and age had drained her of consciousness,
stealing the current surroundings from her
and replacing them with the obtuseness
known only by those who soon become her.
She sits and thinks with laboriousness
until she succumbs and the drugs numb her.

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