Best Draft Poems
Sun-kissed Silhouettes - First DraftUpon her last sighs, she narrates cosmic
sagas flowing within poetic veins.
She still remembers
those idyllic evenings,
engrossed in raining confessions,
influenced by her shipwrecked heart,
expressing scarlet
sentiments that sail in silence,
across unruffled ink-stained waves,
amidst the endless oceans between
their untouched silhouettes.
Her every desire...
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Categories:
draft, emotions,
Form:
Free verse
DraftThis you see is a draft
Minds little notes of lines and verse
In dribs and drabs
In prose, I stab and stab
Repeating oft said words
Expressions rehashed to be reheard
Yearning only for that one to see
This my attempt at being me
The ebb and flow of a sadness boat
Feeble...
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Categories:
draft, anxiety, art, death, introspection,
Form:
Quatrain
Schizophrenia DraftAt first you're in a cloud. But you're not high.
The pills have sucked your dopamine dry.
Most times, you just don't want to try.
Honestly, most times you want to die.
Cast out from society
Split from their reality.
To you, the so called crazy one.
You see...
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Categories:
draft, anger, angst, judgement, mental
Form:
Free verse
Rough Draft DisposedDiversified, she sat upon the page
a tiny dot of incoherence brushed into the ink
She wondered how she got so small
and stretched to reach an "A",
the brink
which started the sentence of her life,
a thousand words to hide away.
While she studied the paper rift
she noticed the...
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Categories:
draft, art, on writing and
Form:
Free verse
Stone Steps of the Asylum - Van Gogh draftI worry about all that stands,
from stone steps to trees,
the friction of those who forever pass by,
held spaces between the sky and the ground.
Whether a view could rush forward,
engulf my airways,
leave me choking...
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Categories:
draft, art,
Form:
Ekphrasis
Categories:
draft, atheist,
Form:
Epigram
A Notional First DraftI wandered and pondered my bleak isolation
As I slowly perused this wide open space
That one cloud above me seemed, like me, quite lonely
Its passage was slow as it matched my own pace
And then I saw poppies so tall, red and bold
I wished they were daffies...
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Categories:
draft, daffodils,
Form:
Rhyme
Munch Vampire DraftYou offer me sanctuary, though I didn't ask
I don't understand but I greedily grasp
You hold me in comfort no matter my flaws
Slowly I settle, start retracting my claws
I'm the frightened animal, unaccustomed to care
Untamed and flighty, yet you don't need to ensnare
Though I sense danger,...
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Categories:
draft, art,
Form:
Ekphrasis
We Choose To Get Lost DraftWe choose to get lost with another soul
And don't consider the logic or goal
Forget all about the risk and danger and cost
With another soul we choose to get lost
To be lost alone is the empty fate
Taking all that time to sit and wait
Never feeling ever...
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Categories:
draft, lost, love,
Form:
Quatrain
First DraftA rough idea
invades brain waves.
Words flow. A pen glides,
line after line across the page.
Anticipation, hope rings.
It grows, lives, sings.
Evaluate, punctuate
strike out, insert
distill, re-frame
copy, finis.
read aloud . . . scrap....
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Categories:
draft, poems, writing,
Form:
Light Verse
Embellishing Draftembellishing draft--
a stirring purple brushwood
old chestnut falls back
10.31.16...
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Categories:
draft, nostalgia, november, october, passion,
Form:
Haiku
Random Thoughts *45* Rough DraftLove like you've never loved before
Reaching your hand out to a closed door
Thinking I knew what was in store
Now I'm suffering, my heart bleeding on the floor
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In the club dancing, alone on the wall
posted up chillin' , drunk, trying not to fall
Not a care at...
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Categories:
draft, inspirational
Form:
Free verse
The Engraver, First Draft, In Need of AdviceIt snowed the day my mother taught me to engrave
She held a waxy green leaf between her mittened fingers
And mapped each yellow vein with her eager eyes
All filled up to the lashes with yellow
Scraping away the green, catching it under her fingernails
...
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Categories:
draft, daughter, hope, mother,
Form:
Free verse
Rough DraftWe are not in the same
Both of us so good at the game
I told you from the get go
Now you don't wanna let go
You didn't take the clue
Infatuated with something new
All the cards said it was wrong
We didn't listen we still went along
Love doesn't have...
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Categories:
draft, desire, relationship, truth,
Form:
Rhyme
Rain - 1st DraftTears of the Heavens enveloping the lands;
Rain is God's gift like the air and the wind.
Precious life's blood in the dry desert sands;
A mystery unleased like the yang and the yin....
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Categories:
draft, nature, rain,
Form:
Free verse