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Fighting Sharks-Draft 2

verse 1 Mr Nice Man nice disguise at the front just like your own paintings blur the edges just like Salvador. verse 2 Promising prizes not like the wisest dont act like you care Predator. Chorus your floating in the wrong seas your fighting me for what for your hunting for the wrong things all like Salvador. Chorus 2 Your fighting in the wrong seas hunting for the wrong things up side down, wrong way round just like Salvador. Bridge verse Your drowning in the blue seas and the pictures getting clearer upside down and counting whats the hunting for. lyric builder in progress- Draft 2

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Date: 12/31/2024 6:05:00 AM
This one's a bit darker, edgier. What's he hunting for? What's his goal, his motive, this shark of yours. Time will tell
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 12/31/2024 6:24:00 AM
yes its turning out darker. i'm brainstorming ideas before l make each of the line verses lyrical and match bar counts, which will come much later. At moment just seeing where the lyric building goes, wish me luck lol. J

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