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My New Poem for "Kawaali" lovers- Love in a Beauty Fair. - Ravindra K Kapoor's Blog

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My New Poem for "Kawaali" lovers- Love in a Beauty Fair.

Blog Posted:10/21/2010 10:13:00 PM
Dear Friends of Poetry Soup,

I am thankful to all those, who have appreciated my new  format of Kawalli in English. I have posted a new 'Kawaali'  today with a new theme and hope you would enjoy this new Poetry/Song/Kawaali, where normally one Male and One Female or more than one singer always take part.

I would appreciate,  if some of you would like to make some changes to convert it into a perfect singing form.  The only thing to remember is that words to be changed should be simple and lucid.

Your comments and your cooperation to make this new  form more appealing would be highly appreciated.

With love and best wishes for all my Poetry Soup members.

Ravindra

Kanpur India 22nd Oct. 2010


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Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2010 9:53:00 AM
Ravindra, that is an incredibly beautiful poem. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. I left a comment on the poem and agree 100 percent with Constance. I wouldn't change a word!! Love, Carolyn
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Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2010 6:43:00 AM
I'll take a look at it, Ravindra! I do like the form you've been showing us lately. Very pleasant. Love, Carolyn
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Andrea
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:46:00 PM
What do you mean that you want us to do to change your poem? Probably the best I could do would be to change it to iambic pentameter or something like that. But I don't think that is what you had in mind? Do you mean like song lyrics with lots of rhyme? Anyway, when I get around to responding to my poetry comments for the day, I will be sure to check out your newest Kawaali! Luv, Andrea
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Constance
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Date: 10/22/2010 12:25:00 PM
I read your poem translation, and I think it is very beautiful, I would not change a thing~~
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Linda-Marie
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Date: 10/22/2010 4:56:00 AM
Will have to go read Ravindra..been so busy with my husband's businesses and our moving last week been tough to keep up souping and reading luv.. trying to catch up this weekend...
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