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Oh' Kashmir Concluded

Concluding Part of Oh’ Kashmir - Last Part 2 One grave mistake was Shown by the decision makers Of Kashmir, To convert the green valley, Into a valley of concrete. Dams, buildings and houses, Were built on places, Which were the nourishing orchards of Nature. ..08 Changed by the greedy lovers of money, The builders, Who built tall buildings and dams, At the cost of destroying Brooks and streams, Lakes and forests, the serene hills And the meadows, Which always reminds us, As the playground of shepherds, Without caring for Trees, plants, animals and seasons, Which always remains the back bone Of every civilization. 09 Another grave mistake was That when some people were trying To drive out, Several thousands of those innocents, Who were the inhabitants of Kashmir, 'The Kashmiri Pandits'. Those who were living there, In Jammu and Kashmir, Since thousands of years, Couldn’t get any solid support, From their friends and neighbors, When they were forced to leave Kashmir, And their friends and neighbors, Who could have stopped the miscreants. 10 But the others remained only A silent spectator, While watching the destruction, Of their friends and neighbors, By those, who wanted to make, Their own separate heaven, Without the presence, Of the blooming smiles, Of these innocents, Who were their friends, their intimates, And their childhood companions. 11 Since a long time, These people in exile Are living in roofless homes, With tents on their heads, They were ignored and were thrown out, As if, they were not humans, And not the oldest inhabitants of the valley. 12 Even after the flood of fifth September When the army men were trying, To put a healing balm, Even at the cost of their lives, On the suffering masses, Trapped in the disastrous flood, During the floods havoc prime time, Some people were throwing stones, On choppers and on these men in service, So that the suffering masses, May not get, The life giving water, foods and medicines. 13 Perhaps the Nature has not liked, Some of these actions, And has shown its anger, As never before in the history of this land, To make us realize, The serious follies and mistakes. 14 Ravindra K Kapoor Kanpur India 17th Sept. 2014

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Date: 10/19/2014 8:30:00 PM
Thanks dear friend for your kind words. I wish that too. Thanks once again for going through poem. More on your page I will write any time tomorrow as I shall be on train till then. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 10/18/2014 9:36:00 AM
wow, lots of stuff I did not know. And how sad that this tragedy occurred on the day of my birthday. I was not even aware of it, I rarely listen to news. sorry for your countrymen and I hope that they will heed nature's warnings in the future. GReat description of this problem.
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Date: 9/17/2014 3:51:00 PM
Bravo, Ravinda! A greedy Concept ignorant of the principle of life's Precept., Agape, Moses
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 9/18/2014 9:57:00 AM
Thank you John for your kind visit and inspiring words. I am not only honored but your presence on my Poem after a very long time has given me lot of happiness and joy. Thank you so much for remembering me and leaving your precious words. More on your page. Sorry there was some delay in reply due internet problems. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 9/17/2014 2:23:00 PM
monumental piece, ravindra... the images and historical references stun me.. huggs
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Date: 9/18/2014 9:25:00 AM
Thanks Nette for your kind words & for appreciating my efforts. Whatever I have mentioned is based on the real happenings & historical facts. If you read history of Kashmir U would come to know that whatever I have referred is based on facts. Kashmiri Pandits & Buddhist were present even 4 thousand years ago. This can be seen in the history of Alexander who came near this area in 326 BC.L & B WA
Date: 9/17/2014 9:51:00 AM
Yes, I totally in agreement with you for wrong decisions, Ravindra
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Date: 9/18/2014 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Ram for your kind appreciations of the given facts. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 9/17/2014 1:21:00 AM
The devastating flood of Jammu and Kashmir of 5th Sept. 2014 has broken all records of the last 100 years. The heaven of Hills suddenly became a living hell within a span of 20 minutes. This Poem shows only some of the reasons which may have influenced the Nature to act, the way it has acted on 5th Sept. 2014 but the calamity for the people of J & K and for India is too grave and serious. My prayers for peace for all those who have lost their lives in this flood havoc....Ravindra K Kapoor
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