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Noah's Ark

In the beginning of the world After creation has been told Noah’s story became unfold Precious as gold, precious as gold God told Noah to build an ark Since people sinned and chose the dark This earth be washed leaving no mark As rain will park, as rain will park He went in with his family Got animals in pairs only Birds by twos- obeying gladly Saved lovingly, saved lovingly Flood rose higher than the mountain Far beyond hundred days when drained Out of the ark, they gladly went New life again, new life again
June 17, 8.55pm Form: Monotetra (This is also a try of a new form)

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  1. Date: 6/18/2013 2:01:00 PM

    I think I just read the winning poem for the contest. I'm not familiar with this form but I like the repetition and flow.
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 12:52:00 PM

    Hello My sweetest friend and poetry sis, Leonora, love the way you unfold one of my most favorite bible stories. Noah and his Ark." A perfect 10 poem. I love the way Noah obeyed God's rule, through the reflection of two. I am going to look up the form. a lovely poem, very graceful ending.. new life again... always & forever... thank you for this poem, a new favorite poem... I will add it on my BLOG BIO... tomorrow... always~ LINDA
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:45:00 AM

    - An amazing "Noah's Ark" poem, Leonora! - The best I've read for this contest. - This is the contest winning poem, number one! - Talented you are, Leonora! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 11:13:00 AM

    This is a tremendous write my friend! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this delightful and amazing poem this afternoon! What an outstanding piece, such a lovely poem, Great work!!
  1. Date: 6/17/2013 10:49:00 AM

    This is a wonderful entry, Leonora. new life again. Wishing you luck with your amazing poem. take care <3 <3 luv* ~ SKAT ~

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