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Kiss Mark of the Sun


When the sun sets and says its sweet goodbye,
It leaves an immense kiss mark on the sky,
A promise that it’ll return tomorrow,
To take away all our fears and sorrow.

Its kiss mark is dappled with lavender,
Birds hover above  to feel its wonder,
The silhouettes of mountains and the trees,
An art of prosperity, joy and peace.

Its kiss mark is in hue of pink and red,
A fiery love of God sent with roses,
Feel its tranquility and its warmness,
Panacea on worries that come ahead.

Crimson sky is the kiss mark of the sun,
A dazzling beauty since the world  begun.

May 19, 2013

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:48:00 PM

    Hi Sweet Leo, i fell in love with your poem, the first time I read the poem.. I love the sky you have colored with your words... Congratulations, luv~ luv~ **PD
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 11:08:00 AM

    Beautiful sonnet Leo love xx
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:51:00 AM

    Beautifully done sonnet Leonora...Love your idea of the sun leaving a 'kiss mark' on the heavens...Congratulations! - Tim
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:21:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win Leonora! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 2:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your deserved win with this beautiful sonnet.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:30:00 AM

    yesss!... super congrats on your shining win.. you put us pinoys right on the mark, leonota!..:) huggs!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:54:00 PM

    Yay! Congratulations on your win in Skat's contest!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:23:00 PM

    CONGRATS !!! Thanks 4 painting my sky RED :-) ~SKAT~
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:52:00 PM

    This is a such a sweet crimson poem! I love the simplicity of the "kiss mark" and you've given it a very lovely image. This one is going into my favorites! :)
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:59:00 PM

    A very beautiful sonnet, Leo sending hugs to you. you painted a very beautiful picture for this contest. it dazzles, and i like the color pink in this imagery... Good luck in the contest with your awesome poem.. luv luv ~Linda
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:55:00 AM

    - Yes, stunning.... - Leonora, you have written a first class sonnet !!!- Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 7:34:00 AM

    Stunning. Absolutely stunning. We all need to embrace the vibe from this piece into the real world.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 5:58:00 AM

    I just loved your kiss mark of the sky my friend! You have delighted me by the beauty of this incredible poem, what a powerful piece you have portrayed Leonora! You don't always see this beauty as you described, however you have shown me the best gorgeousness that I could ever see in the dusk sky! Thank you for that...so I could always see a beautiful sunset by your words here! What an amazing piece, Great Work!! PS you are doing very well with the Sonnet Leonora, good job! Keep it up!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 5:34:00 AM

    My second try on sonnet. I hope I'm really doing it right.

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