Come To Me

Come to me in the hush of night
Come to me in the silence of my dream;
With your sweet smile and eyes so bright
Like sunlight dancing on a stream.
But my eyes are filled with tears
For lost memories of those broken years

The dream so dear, yet bitter sweet
That awakened in a new disguise;
When wanting love we used to meet
And now the ache of yearning eyes
Has slowly closed the door
That once was open and now is no more.

Yet in dreams you come so I can live
A cherished life that yields to death;
Come back in dreams and I will give
Your beating heart its final breath.
Come to me and whisper low
Of a love we lost so long ago.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 12/22/2012 2:30:00 AM
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Date: 11/13/2012 8:25:00 PM
This poem has a timeless beauty. You have nicely weaved the sweetest memories of past in the brightest hopes of today and tomorrow. Memories which thrills the hearts of everyone with their sweet and bitter taste and are our greatest wealth. Great and heart touching write Elizabeth by the melody of its words and rhymes and thank you for your precious and beautiful comments on my series Poem 'Tesu'. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra
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Date: 5/15/2012 9:50:00 AM
ah, the dreams..... Very lovely verse. Sincerely, Cindy
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Date: 5/10/2012 10:33:00 PM
A tenderly touching write, Elizabeth, to this one with "eyes so bright Like sunlight dancing on a stream". You breathe life into this poem. by way of its subtle imagey. It feels quet and peaceful. Best wishes, Mikki
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Date: 5/9/2012 1:46:00 PM
I am trying to catch up some on my thank you's to all the wonderful poets who have left kind comments on my writings. I thank you so much for your words of kindness Elizabeth. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope you are having a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 10:21:00 PM
Marvelous ababcc rhyming... bittersweet, and beautifully contrived. I shall return! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/30/2012 1:27:00 AM
Nice poetic lines Elizabeth. The bitter and sweet memories of a lost love one are beautifully interlaced in your poem. Thank your for sharing. Love Dalila
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:02:00 PM
You are as gifted a poet as there can be, dear Elize. Reading you is always a treat.
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Date: 4/26/2012 2:23:00 PM
the comment prior to mine says it all....TAH
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:01:00 AM
Simply beautiful!
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Date: 4/10/2012 9:40:00 AM
Your pining dear poet in this write, moves yet another poet; yes, I ! May Jehovah bless the dreams you desire dear friend ! By your words, I find you to be the loving soul; I'll pray in Christ name for your colorful dreams ! *smiles* Have a pleasant day Elizabeth ! Much love, james
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Date: 4/9/2012 10:28:00 AM
True feelings of real love just written with the media of words, nice challenge where victory waits with garlands. Loved much your feeling. A true lover challenges in this way i feel. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:53:00 AM
Lizzie, this is truly beautifully written though poignant, it touches the heart.
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Date: 4/5/2012 4:19:00 PM
A wonderful beautifully written poem... Jessica is right- very powerful. So full of your passion for life.
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:13:00 AM
Words so powerful:) really enjoyed reading this piece
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Date: 4/4/2012 1:52:00 PM
pleased to read your emotion filled write Lizzie..
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:50:00 PM
Now I lay me down to sleep. Per chance a dream to dream so deep. Of love so lost in yesterday. Tomorrow just can't find it's way. But, alas, we must go on. To wake up to another dawn. To spread our wings and learn to fly. For if we don't, we'll surely die. So love again with hearts anew. That's really all that we can do. It is exciting to face the day. With brave new souls to find our way.
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:31:00 AM
This sure is such a captivating read, Elizabeth, beautiful words as always-- I sent you email btw, I hope you received it :D
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Date: 4/3/2012 9:05:00 PM
wow, this is so awesome, Elizabeth!! I'll have to check out your book. TEll me, is there a way I can buy it straight from you? I never buy stuff online. thanks, Andrea
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Date: 4/3/2012 3:01:00 PM
Did I read this one on PFT? Very fine write. Carolyn Devonshire is interested in your book. I told her I liked it very much, each poem a jewel. LOve, daver
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Date: 4/3/2012 10:37:00 AM
Most enchanting and passionate love poem. Beautifully worded and rhymed.Thanks for your extremely kind comments on my poem The Wound, Elizabeth. No pleasure in the world has reduced the pain and anguish. -Mohammad
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Date: 4/3/2012 8:58:00 AM
A procrastination of love.. U left sadness on my heart, Elizabeth.
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Date: 4/2/2012 8:53:00 PM
Gmail. I hope you get it.
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Date: 4/2/2012 6:04:00 PM
lovely Elizabeth!
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Date: 4/2/2012 5:58:00 PM
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