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Champagne Toast

*Drunken Master *


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sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
transform from sweet grapes

sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
libation of wine

sweet lavender lips
I heard it through the grapevine
intoxicating -----X----- beverage 
***


by;pd 
4th place
CHEERS!!!

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  1. Date: 5/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

    Beautifully laced here.
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 9:10:00 AM

    A triple 'Cool Hani Luka" PD. Smile, Agape, Moses
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 8:09:00 AM

    Soup Mail
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:53:00 AM

    Thats a poignant representation of haiku out there
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 7:38:00 AM

    Wow!!!!!!!!! Nicely done Poet
  1. Date: 5/20/2013 12:58:00 AM

    hi Linda, I miss your true comments about my writings. I have new poem, "VOICES" hope you can see it. congrats again!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:38:00 PM

    Dear Linda, I did not see Chef today I had to work. I will see him tomorror morning. I'm honored you call me chef. I see you are number one at community builders. Chef was at 17 before he went to the hospital, now he is number 83. I like the who's on line thing. I have seen alot of the names Chef asked me to write to. Sleep well tonight. I will write you tomorrow afternoon Respectfully Flipper
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:28:00 PM

    the haiku chain itself pours with a fluidity of a wine, swilling into this reader's senses... intoxicating.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 7:56:00 PM

    Congrats Linda! thank you also for congratulating me... with love---ELAI
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:54:00 PM

    CLINK!...many congratulations Linda
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:20:00 PM

    PDmeister--many kudos---perfect fermentation of final lines---transformed into grapes, libation of wines,intoxicating!
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:57:00 PM

    Whoa PD. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Cheers. Love T.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:55:00 PM

    Congratulations on your win. Wines is liberation. Great Haiku, well deserved win. Warm Smiles, Connie
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:06:00 PM

    Aloha dear Linda:) Congrats on your win with this superb set of haiku`s.Have a great new week ahead Tiger Tex!! Love Always..Arild
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 11:29:00 AM

    love these haiku, PD. So glad to see it was a winner. Congrats onm your wins, as ever, my friend.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 9:57:00 AM

    Cheers to your health, beauty and good fortune P.D. and go ahead, add a few of your own, if you wish, so the genie can rub his magic lamp, and poof your wishes are his command Sending my love, have a great day, xxx
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:09:00 AM

    Hi, my dearest sis! I came back to say thanks a lot for the sweet Hi. I've just read your message. I hope, you're doing well & no more headaches ;)) especially with the cat;)). I'm wishing you all the luck and all the best esp. this weekend. And, I really love to read once again this excellent winning piece of yours. Adding it again in my fave! Biggest sweet hugs! love m4ever, Leonora
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 4:47:00 AM

    Brilliant. The verse itself pours champagne to my lips lovely haiku. I tried to stick to 5,7,5 rule. but I slip all the time. Love and Hugs manel
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 3:46:00 AM

    Wow! how beautiful the sense of intoxication of dry wine drinks. It allures to create nice things always. Loved the sweetness of intoxicating grapes hanging in the vine. Thanks.......and wish a great congratulation on your win. Loved always.....,bl
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 2:08:00 AM

    Oh, you surprised me with this one my dearest sis Linda! I didn't know you've a new poem as entry in one of the latest contests here. So sorry for being late. Just got my PC fr. the IT center. It overheated yesterday when I worked long on MWord. Well, i'm especially happy to see you won! I want to make a toast with you for your great win and for the excellent haiku of yours. I love it soo much! I've also an entry but i knew already before that the concept wasn't that profound. It was only focused on drinking wine lol. Well, my warm & heartfelt congratulations again with sweet hugs on your awesome poem and win my dearest sis! love much always & 4ever, Leonora
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:14:00 AM

    I know this has nothing to do with grapes, but because of that middle line that song is stuck inside my head now! Other than that good stuff... drunken master? Are we playing Mortal Kombat... lol... sorry I'm kind of in an odd mood at the moment.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 1:13:00 AM

    Great middle line to play off, PD!! Congrats to you too.
  1. Date: 5/19/2013 12:10:00 AM

    Cheers to your sweet success on winning this contest, Linda. (^_^) Noel.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 11:26:00 PM

    I heard it through the grapevine that I love wine. Cheers to this sweet ode to the grapes. I raise my glass to the serenity of your poetic talent
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:54:00 PM

    Good morning sleepy head, am sure its nightey, nightey there and you must be dreaming away to glory..came in to say congrads on this luscious win..it went to my head and I passed away and viola woke up in the morning very clear headed..I love your grapevineyard Princess..lets toast to your win..cheeeeers..
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:04:00 PM

    Lovely grapey haiku, Linda. Congrats on the win... Jack
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:00:00 PM

    I was still invited by your deep and extra-ordinary creation. May be I forgot to tell you this is awesome. Very well written. I'm still thinking of making another overt tribute to you. One Love Mistress. AO
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:46:00 PM

    Thank you so much on a very nice piece. I love your take in the contest. Thanks for the visits and the blessings. Congrats on your well deserved win. One Love Mistress. AO
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:25:00 PM

    Hi Linda congrats on win, pretty good for a last minute entry. This is one of my personal favorites in the contest. Thanks for all your thoughtful visits today.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:42:00 PM

    Hi Linda, I ansered your soup mail to me. Respectfully Flipper
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