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Golden Corral

 (You Can't fool everyone)


1#      fooled by the sun leading the perfect crowd, one cow left behind.

2#     twisting lines, he shepherds a flock into a dark corner

3#     endless buffet in question,  his eyes spot a broken artist

For XXX Contest :) Wish me Luck

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  1. Date: 2/8/2016 7:03:00 PM

    But I like artificial stuff. Geez whiz PD
  1. Date: 2/8/2016 6:11:00 PM

    Wow, very original, read many times.... Thanks for sharing Linda! Keith;-)
  1. Date: 2/8/2016 4:20:00 PM

    This read ever so well as a complete poem, with 'One Cow left behind' the last line interesting which ever way one reads it.
  1. Date: 2/8/2016 4:35:00 AM

    You are also very brave to be the one pointing this out. You have to know someone is going to spill the beans. Ideas are never secure, but they can be right on target. So the question for the owner is, "Do you love food, or do you just love what the crowd brings you ($)?" I hope it is the former. It takes a lot of tender loving care to make a meal that is deliciouso and good for people. I don't know the place. There's only four in NY, and I have never been to one. Probably bad!!!
  1. Date: 2/8/2016 3:34:00 AM

    Eat healthy to stay healthy...bad food clogs the heart. "Out of the heart are the sources of life..." A multi- leveled warning- sometimes beef can be bad for you. :)Hugs!! Deserves a 7 for being a heart health warning...<3<3<3
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 6:27:00 PM

    oh dang and I thought this was gonna be about FOOD. Methinks it is metaphorical. I enjoyed this, PD. you sure caught my attention with the title. I avoid this place because I lose all control when I'm in it!
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 5:26:00 PM

    looks can always be deceiving, everything promising is not what it seems .... stay away from the chocolate fountain haha
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 4:55:00 PM

    Reads like a winner..I need to check this contest out..Your entry has me wondering about it..We don't know what we are eating unless we eat at home foods made from scratch and even then we really don't know what we are eating..A person kind of in the family had a bad reaction after eating grapes..The doctor told her that she was allergic to something about those grapes that it was an allergic reaction..She told the doctor well I washed them really well..Continued..SK
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 3:36:00 PM

    Good luck Linda...and good appetite...^W^
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 2:34:00 PM

    Interesting choice of subject with a powerful message behind it, lambs to the slaughter. Another great poem in a very long list of excellence!
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 1:45:00 PM

    GoodLuck in contest. Enjoyed--very creative
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 1:27:00 PM

    Good luck with your creation.
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 1:24:00 PM

    Now, Linda, you be nice to them Broncos - ha! All of Colorado is in an uproar today re the Broncs playing in the Super Bowl. The cops are doing their best to contain the drunks that usually result from this day. Enjoy the game - bob h
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 12:11:00 PM

    Hi PD much wisdom here and not surprising from one of my poet friends you were there when I first posted and still here today good to catch up with you again good luck in the comp all the best Poetowen
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 9:32:00 AM

    You have captured so much philosophy and wisdom into a few lines. It flows great and makes sense in this madcap world. Emile.
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 7:48:00 AM

    wishing you very good luck ... hugs you dear:)...
  1. Date: 2/7/2016 12:38:00 AM

    Wishing you good luck....Nice poem.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 9:14:00 PM

    My kids love the desert bar...I like the cook to order steak....not bad a place but good when 4 kids have 4 different ideas for dinner.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 8:43:00 PM

    Deceit is a weapon that leads innocence into slaughter, yet a broken artist may avenge the sacrafice of an ill guided multitude..I prefer to cook for myself. Xool poem of self empowerment Linda...J.A.B.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 8:29:00 PM

    Linda, your magery is superb. Best of luck in the contest.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 12:22:00 PM

    Very interesting write Linda..like lambs led to the slaughter. It looks good from far away but far away from looking good. I did see the movie. Dark and disturbing. Reminds me of something. Your the master my friend. Blessings always Carl
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 12:15:00 PM

    I am not much on movies but I am of food. That gorgeous spread made my mouth water. Well writ Linda.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 12:06:00 PM

    Hi Linda, Thank you for your kind words on my poems, regarding The Golden Coral, didn't see thee movie Ghost Ship of yet nor have I been to that buffet eatery, I liked the 3 verses they gave vision to being there although I'm not able to connect it to th movie. So you force me to get the movie ..smiles --Michael
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 11:28:00 AM

    I've been to Golden Corral before ... it's a love-hate situation to most people! These monoku are funny and yet mysterious. Room for multiple interpretations here. The second one makes me think of a waiter who lures unsuspecting customers into the restaurant (just what kind of restaurant is this!? lol). The first one makes me wonder ... where's the beef? And I'm not quite sure what to say about the third. Is Mr. Waiter going after broken artists? You make me question eating there! Hahaha
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 10:50:00 AM

    You have lifted the artificial veil and showed what is real in reality. First monoku speaks wisdom, second one speaks if one misguides at end he's caught by right one and last one's of perfect vision. i have not seen the movie sure. Best of luck for contest entered in to with this precious monoku serials, my lovely *friend. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 10:11:00 AM

    Very insightful write, dear Linda. We have a couple of Golden Corrals here in Col Springs - have been to them but I try to avoid all you can eat places 'cause I tend to pig out big time. Many thx for your kind comments re some of the poems I recently posted. Cheer for the Broncos tomorrow!!!! - Bob h
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 10:02:00 AM

    I have heard of the golden corral and have seen ghost ship, great movie by the way... the food does look good but not everything so tempting is good for you! Love how you pieced this one together...leaves a lasting imprint in the mind, good luck in the contest! Love and hugs Sandy
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 9:40:00 AM

    This is very creative, Linda. Food looks delicious, but I am always somewhat wary when eating out....I suppose I would be like that 'one cow' who realized that the grass is not as fresh and green as it looks! ~ Now you tempt me also to see the Ghost Ship:) hugs // paul [sm]
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 9:03:00 AM

    beautifully crafted with an ambiguous artistic style. The images are as well tantalizing and saliva stimulating. Best of luck in the contest Linda.
  1. Date: 2/6/2016 8:45:00 AM

    Hello my dearest sis! It was like the place a while ago for my dinner. Foods look good but when served.... ops! :)) i love how you crafted each line.. indeed a chain of precious gems! Tip-top single liners! I should have done mine like these.:( But I will see what I can do tom. Best of luck in the contest my dearest sis. Thanks a lot for stopping by on my poem. I'll be back. My SM pls. love lots forever Bff-sis, Leonora
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