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A Christmas Snow

Bundled in goose down like their feathered friends;
they plump outside for they've no wish to stay in;
they dive in the snow, the mundane to transcend.
 
Boys howl and they whistle and the girls defend
igloos of snow bricks with rosy cheeks and chins,
bundled in goose down like their feathered friends.

Small toddlers fall boom, make angels and pretend
that the snowflakes are food, as their silly faces grin;
they dive in the snow the mundane to transcend.

Snow geese honk and a large flock descends,
roaring with laughter the children rush in,
bundled in goose down like their feathered friends.

Mother lights the Christmas tree on the bend
and Father grabs a scarf and joins the din.
They dive in the snow, the mundane to transcend.

Snowballs zoom, as sisters and brothers contend
even the pooch prances (for of course he is kin).
Bundled in goose down like their feathered friends,
they dive in the snow the mundane to transcend.
 











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  1. Date: 12/19/2014 8:20:00 AM

    There is snow business like snow business. Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 12/19/2014 8:18:00 AM

    If I didn't know better I would think I was rubbing off on you (unintentional sexual pun). As you know the child in me is my calling card. However I know you already own a very light joyful touch to your nature not always recognized by everyone. A Fav. love you!
  1. Date: 12/19/2014 1:10:00 AM

    This poem brings back so many fond childhood memories... A lovely write, Debbie. Congrats on your win!... I do appreciate your kind congrats and comments. Thank you so much!
  1. Date: 12/18/2014 2:13:00 PM

    Those were the days, weren't they? I remember making show angels, as a kid; such fun. Thanks for the memory.
  1. Date: 12/17/2014 9:31:00 PM

    Your poem was so much fun Debbie. It kept me smiling till the end. Congratulations on your win.
  1. Date: 12/17/2014 11:40:00 AM

    Brings back memories of the past. Lovely..
  1. Date: 12/17/2014 3:37:00 AM

    Elegant and elegant Christmas is my rebirth too Well written theme Bryan Loves..xoxo
  1. Date: 12/14/2014 7:41:00 PM

    This was delightful to read. It took me there Debbie. Congratulations!#7
  1. Date: 12/14/2014 12:43:00 PM

    a delight to read Debbie - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
  1. Date: 12/14/2014 7:34:00 AM

    Hurry Up! no time to wait for that moment. A sweet Merry Christmas it's. Lovely worded my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
  1. Date: 12/14/2014 3:30:00 AM

    Wonderful imagery n a delightful read,, tough form ,, congrats on fine win Debbie!
  1. Date: 12/14/2014 2:30:00 AM

    Villanelles are so tricky to write, because of the heavy repetition - but that didn't hinder your poetic prowess. You paint a delightful evening of Christmas shenanigans - I like Cyndi's comment on "Charlie Brown-ish"... great work!
  1. Date: 12/13/2014 10:10:00 AM

    Congratulations on placing with this wonderful Villanelle.
  1. Date: 12/13/2014 1:28:00 AM

    great villanelle Debbie surprised it was not placed much higher. Not any easy form. Yet you have done it with a-plume good rhyme, rhymth and meter. hugs
  1. Date: 12/12/2014 8:55:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery and well crafted, congrats on the win, Deb. Light and Love
  1. Date: 12/12/2014 8:52:00 PM

    I love this and May God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
  1. Date: 12/12/2014 8:34:00 PM

    Debbie, congratulations on your win for this lovely poem. So many images that bring back memories! Sandra
  1. Date: 12/12/2014 5:34:00 PM

    In an effort to keep Soup etiquette, I am only going to say this is truly beautiful and its language so good... plump, a noun used as a verb, all those kids so "Charlie Brownish" in their layers of snowsuits. Yup. They plump, indeed. Now, if I were not to be up on soup etiquette, you darn well know what I'd say... ;).... MHAH
  1. Date: 12/12/2014 12:07:00 PM

    A complete Chrismas snow,congrats on the win Debbie...huggs
  1. Date: 12/11/2014 12:56:00 PM

    not often I read something tha takes me back to the snows of my childhood but you have..good luck in the contest
  1. Date: 12/11/2014 7:40:00 AM

    I am impressed Debbie, a very enjoyable read.
  1. Date: 12/10/2014 9:57:00 PM

    Happy one :D Like the imagery very much!
  1. Date: 12/10/2014 8:58:00 PM

    gosh, debbie, a villanelle can be such a cool form when it is in the RIGHT hands. and it fell into the right hands with YOU doing this poem. One of the better ones I have seen in this contest. This would be a high win if it were in a contest of mine.
  1. Date: 12/10/2014 8:30:00 PM

    enjoyed your delightful poem -- winter fun.

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