Submit a Poem
Get Your Premium Membership
spacer
Pinterest button
NextLast
 

Fruitless Cycles

retched, a stomach twisting curdle
sour, the bile that rises from malcontent
tearful, yet, tears are futile, a waste of water
understanding seems never to come or come too late
all one can do is suck it and try to love again



NextLast

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

 
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 10:24:00 PM

    YOu really got across the emotion of this one, Debs!
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 7:41:00 PM

    I love the emotion and word images. I can't parse the form though, at least in this variation. Cheers, Roy
  1. Date: 5/21/2013 4:47:00 PM

    You have the ending write, trying to love again, this can be a powerful moment in time, sending you peace filled thoughts xxx

Back