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Peek A Boo

Oh yes, I see you, the Doc let me peek
for so long you were blurred no more than a
little gray wiggly blob Daddy would say boo

to [as if you could hear him?] saying "boo".
Maybe you did hear because out you came a
bit early! Dad was there again to peek.

Sorry about the light being so bright, a
bit scary. You started boo hooing, boo,
but your were gorgeous, still, at first peek.

So of course your first game was peek a boo!


TRITINA

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7/22/14




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  1. Date: 7/22/2014 8:12:00 PM

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  1. Date: 7/22/2014 5:51:00 PM

    I really like yours, Debs. It's different, out of the box. One thing though, I did not understand the function of "a" in your last stanza / line one. by the way, Craig and I discussed this form and he realized that I was right about it. The Tritina does not make you use your three words side by side at the end of the final phrase. I did not do mine that way, and I hope others can realize it is not necessary.
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 5:51:00 PM

    We can't see about the poems anymore?
  1. Date: 7/22/2014 5:38:00 PM

    charming write Debbie - there is no about this poem link as far as i can see it seems to have disappeared! Hugs Jan x

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