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The Poetic Justice

As legend has it, there lived Bai Balkhash, a rich man
In the North regions of the then Soviet Kazakhstan
Had a beautiful daughter Ili who was without her Smiley
So Balkhash held a feast with a contest to win Ili.

Ili, loved a shepherd called Karatal and easily managed
For Karatal to win the contest of the grooms  staged
But Karatal followed the ancient tradition of love stories
Wherein the fathers were supposed to oppose the realities.

Now the lovers had no option but to run away and marry
And the angry father had no options to go contrary
So he turned them into rivers and himself a lake between.
Made himself a laughing stock taking water from rivers twin.

Today’s reality is Kazakhstan and China using Ili’s water
Poetic justice done, the lake drying, two rivers dying forever.


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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 12:38:00 PM

    Missing You.....Our Lifetime Member...
  1. Date: 4/20/2013 8:19:00 AM

    How are you Dr Mehta. We all miss you a lot. Love and best wishes...Ravindra
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 9:59:00 PM

    Lovers, and their struggles. NO matter how powerful the entity of human creation, it is but us, lovers and all.
  1. Date: 2/27/2013 3:41:00 PM

    Very interesting write....:-)
  1. Date: 2/5/2013 5:01:00 PM

    !!!
  1. Date: 1/8/2013 1:25:00 AM

    Your fable is well told and aptly put. This is a great way to make a boring political rant into a fascinating read!
  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:20:00 AM

    HAPPY NEW YEAR!
  1. Date: 12/17/2012 7:56:00 AM

    I was caught by the title but captivated by your writing. I simply enjoyed reading this and hope to keep reading more. Sami.
  1. Date: 12/15/2012 2:38:00 PM

    This was magnificent! I hope your Poetry does not dry up now that I have had a drink.
  1. Date: 11/13/2012 4:16:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your poetry this evening Doc. Thank you so much for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup.
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:33:00 AM

    no, it looks like I removed it from the contest. darn it! maybe you could run it all over again,,,hmmm,,, hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 9/27/2012 10:31:00 AM

    Dr. Mehta! I seen a comment by you on someone's poem. I have really missed reading your new poetry. You still have a contest up that has not been judged. I think I have left my entry in, but I was worried that something grave had befallen you. So happy to see you around. love and hugs, catie :)
  1. Date: 6/1/2012 3:19:00 AM

    Dr. Ram, do u know how much you are missed?...I pray your health is strong and u have found happiness in other things or poetry sites....Know things aren't the same without your work and comments here....Gwendolen
  1. Date: 4/25/2012 10:18:00 AM

    It is long since we have not heard and seen anything from you Dr. Ram. Are you in India or in US. Hope you are well and will soon be with us. Best wishes for your good health and well being. ...Ravindra
  1. Date: 4/16/2012 2:24:00 PM

    very nice.
  1. Date: 3/28/2012 10:34:00 PM

    Soulful expression of a legend beautiful but sad at the same time. Dr Ram, hope you are keeping well and everything fine at your end, haven't seen you here lately.. miss your fine work here, best wishes and regards, gautami
  1. Date: 3/10/2012 10:20:00 AM

    Hope you are well as I have not seen your name lately on the soup. Take care. love phyl
  1. Date: 2/22/2012 8:22:00 AM

    Are you ok Dr. Ram? have not seen your informative writes lately. take care and God bless!!
  1. Date: 2/16/2012 1:43:00 AM

    Two rivers dying forever and dying together. I love this. Thank you.
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 7:34:00 PM

    thank you for this sad yet beautiful tale DR. I hope you are keeping well and many best wishes for you n your family in the new year
  1. Date: 1/26/2012 4:10:00 PM

    Where have you gone Dr Ram? Let us hear from you.....and let's all get back together writing on Poetry Soup
  1. Date: 1/13/2012 9:43:00 AM

    WHERE ARE U DR. RAM? WE MISS U MUCH.. I JUST RETURNED AFTER SIX WEEKS.. AM RECUPERATING IN ITALY FROM HAND SURGERY.. PLEASE KEEP IN TOUCH MY FRIE3NED.. LUV.. LET US KNOW WHERE U ARE PLEASE..
  1. Date: 1/8/2012 9:08:00 AM

    So sad... still it is a beautiful legend... Modern society destroys so many things...Well written. Facinating write.
  1. Date: 1/6/2012 10:49:00 PM

    I haven't been on in a long time.I posted a new write yesterday for all soupers.Lost and Lonely.May my poetry legend live on.
  1. Date: 12/31/2011 10:48:00 PM

    A sad write here Dr Mehta.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.
  1. Date: 12/19/2011 4:34:00 PM

    Oh Dr. Mehta, This is a most wonderful yet tragic tale. I do so enjoy your poetic drama...Love it As Always, Shar
  1. Date: 12/5/2011 9:03:00 AM

    Enjoyed hearing this sad tale. love phyl
  1. Date: 12/4/2011 8:12:00 AM

    sad
  1. Date: 12/1/2011 11:39:00 PM

    I thank you Dr Ram for telling me a poem i did was featured on the 11 11th yours Joe
  1. Date: 11/27/2011 5:26:00 AM

    Great writing Dr Ram,its amazing what can be putted into poetry..thanks for sharing with us:) Have a nice Sunday!
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