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The Love Story of Kacha and Devayani 9

NOTE: Sorry that in spite of my best efforts & attempts the Poetry lines are breaking with extra spaces between lines here and there. This is happening placing the Poem on PS. I have no idea why it is happening. Earlier I have even deleted the contents and have reposted the poem with almost no results. Ravindra K Kapoor 18th Aug. 2014 The Love Story of Kacha And Devayani 9 Devayani And you remember Kacha, That in the season of autumn, You often used to get lost, In praising my beauty In your poems and songs, With the beauty Of your dear Nature, While watching the splendid treasure, Of the forests, And its falling leaves. 30 How such alluring images, Which were so sweetly carved, Deep in your heart and soul, Have suddenly vanished, From your mind and heart, Like the glimmer Of a summer clouds, Dear Kacha? 31 Try to remember Kacha, Those strong gush of, Autumn winds, Which used to take away, The half hanging dry leaves, From trees, Creating the most pleasing, Musical sounds, Of the flying and falling leaves, In the calm and quietness, Of our lovely forest Where we both Used to spend lot of our time In searching and collecting The wonderful herbs as needed By my father & your Guru For making his magical remedies. 32 But in those moments, You were often more fascinated By the beauty, Of those few golden leaves, Fallen from the trees, But staying in my hairs, While kissing and playing With the disturbed locks of hairs, Which always inspired you To create, Some of yours most fabulous songs, In praising the splendid beauty, Of your dear Nature And your beloved. 34 Can you recall sing those lines Of your sweet song Dear Kacha Song lines Part 1 “My beloved’s face and beauty, Has magical charms, To attract anything, In this wonderful season, Of Autumn, The shining tiny golden leaves, Have come, Not only to stay with her, But to decorate, Her long golden black hairs, As a crown, On Nature’s most beautiful Queen.” 35 Ravindra Kanpur India 17th Aug. 2014 To continue in next. Protected under the Copyright provisions of Poetry Soup. Ravindra K Kapoor NOTE: To know the background of story please read Part 1.

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Date: 8/31/2014 4:38:00 AM
Beautifully captured on paper Ravindra. This is a true romance of great interest. I have enjoyed this passage immensely. Verlena
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/31/2014 7:41:00 AM
I am so grateful for your kind comments dear friend. For a moment I had a feeling that perhaps on Poetry Soup there is no liking for such love poems. Your comments would help me to restore my ideas to finish it as an unprecedented love series in next few more episodes. Thank you once again and for your beautiful comments. More on your page. Love and best wishes always…Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 2:48:00 AM
Yet another beautiful write Ravindra ! I always await reading ur amazing work! Bravo well done!
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 6:50:00 AM
Thanks for your kind & precious words. I am trying my best to make it a unique Love Story. The current trend of appreciation for such series Poems are not much on PS, unlike the previous years when such works were more in appreciation. Still the beauty of this story has encouraged me to take it towards its conclusion. More on your Page. L & B W always..Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 8/18/2014 12:35:00 AM
I am quite hopeful that for those who take interest in series Poems, this Love Story of Kacha and Devayani would be getting more and more romantic and interesting, while unveiling those hidden beauty of Nature and Love, which we often miss in our modern life. Your views would be highly appreciated on the progress of this story. With Love a best wishes for all the viewers...Ravindra K Kapoor
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