Judgement

Judgment

When I shall be the old man here,
Forgot by time, uncountable by year,
When I shall wish to pass the living brink,
At You I shall devote my thought and think.

Uselessness I`ll see in all that I achieve,
If I do not have love or can`t forgive
To do with love all that you have so ruled,
Unknown or known as suffering endured.   

Washed I should not be from any of my sins,
If I did never forget or never forgive since
The hour of balance is inclined toward my trap, 
And hardly passes us one thought or any other step.

And if I did not help that stranger foreign man,
A good word for the pain of that wretch sideman,  
If I have never known to help my friend or mat, 
In vain I shall be sorry, cry shouting or fill pat.  

Or maybe all these I have done presuming, 
But without love, alien and with so confiding,
Than I am just a sonorous forefinger copper,
An ugly earth body without climbing upper.

But even so, there is existing one more chance,
The wisdom in the last hour of one slippery Trans,
     To give me power to see what does He want,
As life to give me; not to take and be redundant.  

But sorrows, which born from facts and sin,
As are recognized, even now could be foreseen
That Judge with love in everything he does,
Inquires all and, with affection… forgives us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 12/14/2009 7:38:00 PM
Beautiful and Very well written poem. The starting lines are Outstandingly beautiful and a good revealing of your inner conflicts and feelings. Thanks and Best wishes and love Ravindra
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:37:00 PM
I thought this was a very well thought out poem. Congratulations on getting a win with this piece. I know I'll probably have to read it again; but I think it's really beautiful.
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Date: 11/20/2009 3:28:00 PM
This is wonderful poetry, Florentina! Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest...well deserved!!
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Date: 9/29/2009 12:01:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Florentina. Love, Carol
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