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Passionate Smile

I look at you with a knowing smile
Sometimes we don't even need our words
You extend your arms for my embrace
My smile is transformed into a kiss

Sometimes we don't even need our words
I cannot take my eyes off of your lips
My smile is transformed into a kiss
The passion within begins to grow

I cannot take my eyes off of your lips
You extend your arms for my embrace
The passion within begins to grow
I look at you with a knowing smile


First attempt at this form, this is a challenging one.
Thanks to Manel Gunatillake for introducing me to this form.

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  1. Date: 5/18/2013 10:04:00 PM

    I didn't see your foot note. Thank you my dearest you have elevated me. My next poem will be a pantoum as tribute to you.
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 9:29:00 PM

    fantastic. you have got it right. you have chosen a good theme for a pantoum. Have you felt the music in it. Lovely theme. Thank you for your comments on my poem. Love and hugs
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 8:20:00 PM

    words just flow.take care
  1. Date: 5/18/2013 6:36:00 PM

    Richard...how do you make everything LOOK so easy. This was beautiful and flowing and for a first...it's just amazing. The content is so sweet as well.

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