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A Short Story of Winter Wonders

"A Short Story of Winter Wonders" The old man looked at the sky, which was still dark, Amid the chilling waves, of cold and aching cries, Which were coming, due to long food less day and nights, His body’s flashes, bones and even his stomach too were aching. Without the sign of any warmth, of any kind except a little food, Which with difficulty he could secure, for his ailing, hungry wife, His destination was his beloved wife, who was still a little away from him, There was no place to warm up, in that chill biting time, Without the hope of any glimpse, of the Sun’s slightest warmth and shine. He prayed to God, to give him a little more strength, So that his tired and aching legs, may reach near his waiting wife, As her last hopes and eyes, must be hanging on the doors, To see her love at least once, before she departs to heavenly shrine. The old man suddenly saw, the glimpse of his doors and pushed his aching legs, Next moment, he was inside the doors and found his love and hopes were still alive. Ravindra K Kapoor Kanpur India. 29th Dec. 2018 For Poetry Soup's contest "Winter Wonderland"

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Date: 8/18/2019 12:59:00 PM
A poem of dedicated love despite obstacles. Enjoyed reading your poems.
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Date: 3/30/2019 8:14:00 AM
Nicely done, I love how you use the winter almost of their lives. It brings hope that in those long cold hours better things will come if we hold out. Hard in the moment but we come through it - and often stronger in resilience.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 3/30/2019 8:10:00 PM
Thank you so much dear friend Anna for liking the poem. More on your page. with best wishes.....
Date: 3/30/2019 8:13:00 AM
Nicely done, I love how you use the winter almost of their lives. It brings hope that in those long cold hours better things will come if we hold out. Hard in the moment but we come through it - and often stronger in resilience.
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Date: 1/6/2019 9:56:00 AM
Nicely done, Ravindra, perfect for the contest. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/6/2019 10:09:00 PM
Thanks dear friend Eve for liking the poem and thanks for your kind good wishes. More on your page soon. with best wishes for the New Year. Ravindra
Date: 1/5/2019 8:57:00 AM
This is beautiful, now is the season for winter to reason and bless the city with flakes of snow... If by December, heaven's refrigerator does not decend, weather will then suffer a treason that nature will surely deny... This is a wonderful piece friend
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Date: 1/1/2019 10:49:00 PM
It was so nice to hear from you Ravindra. India inspires me. Your story was touching with a great ending to welcome in the new year! I enjoyed reading it! Blessings, Connie xxoo : )
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/6/2019 5:31:00 AM
Thanks df Connie for liking the poem and its ending and thanks for your kind words. It always a pleasure to be among my wonderful poetry soup friends. More on your Page soon. Love and best wishes always with best wishes for 2019....Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/1/2019 1:25:00 PM
- A wonderful little story, Ravindra :) - Nice to see you :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/6/2019 5:21:00 AM
Thanks df Anne for liking and kind words. It is always great to be among the poetry soup friends. My Good Wishes for a very Happy and bright New Year for you dear friend. More on your page. With best wishes always....Ravindra
Date: 12/31/2018 2:32:00 PM
how inspiring, dear ravindra...you handled the plot with such words of endearment!... huggs
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/1/2019 2:09:00 AM
Thanks dear friend Nette for your kind inspiring comment. It is always beautiful to see my good friends of poetry soup on PS and on face book as well. Hope you must be enjoying the 1st Day of New Year with with family and friends and with your poems. Wishing you a Happy New Year 2019.
Date: 12/31/2018 10:55:00 AM
I like how your story had a great ending, Ravindra. A lovely story this is. Happy New Year to you, my friend.
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 1/1/2019 2:06:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend Andrea for liking the story poem post. Hope you are enjoying the 1st Day of New Year with all your poetic warmth and beauty with your family. My Good Wishes for you and your family for the New Year 2019
Date: 12/31/2018 1:44:00 AM
Nicely done,Ravindra, it sounds so cold.. Good luck in the contest. May you have a blessed New Years. Hugs Eve
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Ravindra K Kapoor
Date: 12/31/2018 7:01:00 AM
Thank you dear friend Eve for liking the poem and thank you for your kind wishes. With best wishes for the New Year 2019....More on your page soon. ...Ravindra
Date: 12/29/2018 8:14:00 AM
With by a little late Christmas Greetings I would like to give my Best Wishes to all my Poetry Soup’s old and new friends for the New Year 2019. May God fulfil your wishes and dreams in the year 2019. ....Ravindra K Kapoor
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/31/2018 1:45:00 AM
:) thank you

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